Hey guys,

First post. Can you please tell me where I screwed up in Pt2 (initial text)

Short story;

Pt1
Was out with my guy mates on Friday at a local club, sitting down when these two 8's sat down at my table and introduced themselves to me. One of the chicks caught my eye, she kept looking at me so I stare back...
Next minute she gets up walks over to me and say "lets go to the dance floor" Me " I don't dance" her "come on".
So I go to the dance floor - two minutes later I went in for the make out, I then tell her I'm going to go sit down.
She asks "do you want me to come with you" me "okay If you want" I wasn't too bothered.
She comes back to the table and I get my phone out and give it to her, she then put her name and number in it.
We went back to the dance floor, a couple of minutes later her friend (the other comes and starts grinding on me lol. After that she got too clingy so I parted ways.

Pt2
I texted the chick the next week on Wednesday.
Here it is play by play.

Me: Hey trouble, what's up? - Mrsmith1234
Her: Hey sup what Mrsmith1234 is this?
Me: The sexy guy you hooked up with at "Club name".
Her: Haha oh yeah you naughty lol
Me: I think you're the naughty one . What you up to?
Her: Haha all you, me in bed so tired from wrk hby?
Me: Bed aye, hmmm interesting... Wouldn't you say?
Her: Very lol see your naughty
Me: What are you wearing?
Her: What are you wearing? lol
Me: Not a lot. What about you? I asked you first, details :p.
Her: Haha not much aswell.
Me: Hmm... So what else do you do for fun other than being a tad naughty?

No text back after then....
(That is all word for word)

I would say from "what are you wearing?" is where it loses funniness and becomes creepy.

I did not put a lot of effort into it, I was just seeing how far I could push it.
Would love some advice, maybe even a salvage. Just wanna arrange the date/bang, pretty much.

Thanks

Mrsmith1234