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PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2012 5:38 am 
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I know this girl Pretty good for years, Weve been on & off friends & like 3 Years Ago we almost Fucked. But Recently we met at a party again & Started talking again.

Convo was going good, Want to know what i Could've said better in Some parts, And Also how i Could've elevated this better & Steered it into the direction talking about us Completely Fucking & Setting something up.

I Should of went more direct. . Ehh, So Critique me & let me know! Thanks :D

Me-Punkk !

Her-Loser. !

Me-Whatcha Up To !

Her-Nothing at all . Don't feel good. How about yu. ?

Me-Fresh out the Showaa , Just rolled 2 Joints , Bouta 'Relax' x ]

Her-That's what I NEED to get rid of this intense pain niice that's how yu do it. !
Rate : 7.8
Confession: yur mad goofy.
(I liked a Status Where she rates n Shit)

Me-Lol Why you so Soar ? Rough nights ? x P

Her-Haha. Noo. My acid reflix is really bad right now -.-

Me-So Stop Toppin off & you wont get it Duhh ! (Giveing head Lol, I'm Being a Dick)

Her-I don't top anyone offf

Me-I was fuckin with you But..
C'mon [Her Name], Lettuce be Reality here .

Her-Like I said before only during 69 nd I hardly do that. I'm keeping it a buck. But noo I have stomach problems -______-

Me-Lol Kinky x P
Shame Shamee ! Use to be all Small & Innocent n Cute n Stuff .

Her-Haha. I know.ctfu So what yu trynna say I am now . ?

Me-Lolol. . A Lil Playaa Playaa, I'm With It Tho ,
Playin Dudes, Havein Em' Eat the Box & Kickin Em to the Curbb

(Last time we seen eachother we talked about nothing but sex really & how she Plays Guys Kinda Lol)

Her-I aint playin them. I'm single. Bc when it comes down to bussiness I run shiiit. Haha

Me-Aha I Feel That, Me & You Would Never Get Along .

Her-Aha. Why's that. ?

Me-Cause I Run Shitt in Bed, Im Not Dineing Till I Know its Worth it Ahah

Her-Ctfu. ! Well I get boys whipped without that first lol

Me-Psh Yeah they Must be Just 'Boys' if there Getting Whipped ! Lolol

Her-Nahh in their 20s. Haha.

Me-PUSSYS ! That Shit'd Never Flyy With me : x

Her-Yu probably have just don't remember . Lol or didn't realize it

Me-Never ever ever ever ! I Know my Values & Personality to Good ,
Describe 'Whipped'

Her-Git them wrapped around my finger . But I don't take them seriously. Lol

Me-Lol If it worked like that, It Would Look Like my Fingers Were made of Rings .
You basically give them Pity Fucks Ahaha Poor Fools .

Her-Ctfu. ! Same hereee haha

Me-Guess Non of These Guys Give it to you Right, Your Not Staying . Lolol Shuckss .

Her-Nahh just don't like commitment shiit. Nd yu can say the same to yu. Haven't got that good pussy.

(Got surprised, Didnt know where to take it here, seen to many choices & my mind was overwhelemed)

Me-Yeah i Feel You on That, & Idk if I Would Say that, Same Reasons though. & Whatchu Sayin your Some Top Notch Amazing Fuck ? Lol

Her-Haha. Yuup. Jk idk. Just they don't have the WHOLE package. Haha

Me-Aha Hmm. . & Whatchu Mean "WHOLE" Package. . Missin a Nut or Sum Shit ? 0_o Lololol

Her-Ctfuuu. ! Nahh . Like they would be blayzin but then .. ;( or they'll be decent w/ a. ( ; haha.

Me-Lol I Guesss, Like i Hate Broads Who Cant Handle, n Keep Up Sayin it Hurt or Gettin All Soar n Exhausted. So Fragile Lmao .

Her-Lmao. ! Yu gotta find a bad bitch. !

Me-Riightt ! These [Where we Live] Are Not Bout' it !

Her-WeLl there is yur first problem. Yu choosin valley girls. Lol

Me-Arnt Youu a [Our Town] Girl Lol .
Your not worth it ? : X Hmm

Her-Yeahh but i don't be messing w/ guuys from here.

Me-Lol Yeahh, Its Kinda Like a Challenge, Findin a Broad Who's Top Shelf Shit, Anyone out there who Culd Prove me Wrong Like !


10 Min Later Me. . . : Yeoo Bietchh, Im Out Clubbin Fri, But Whatchu Doin Sat Im Tryna Get Up with Sum LQ

She Responded But Boringly, Just said there s aBeach Party Sat & Im Probably going, But Whateve's, I just wanted a more Sexual Outcome, So tell me what you would've said where Etc etc. .

Thanks a Bunch !

Btw, Thats How we type, All Computer Slang & Shit, Stupid but whatever thats how it is Now'adays, im 18 By the way. Trust me i know my Grammar & Shit im Just a Goofball sometimes to.

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PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2012 5:49 am 
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Not reading all that shit, my time's too valuable.


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Obviously Not, You took the time to Inform me of your Valueable time . But The time you took to right that wasnt Benefitial or Valuable Whatsoever. Chump. . . :roll:

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Obviously Not, You took the time to Inform me of your Valueable time . But The time you took to right that wasnt Benefitial or Valuable Whatsoever. Chump. . . :roll:
Evidently spelling and coherency of thought aren't your finer virtues.


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Obviously Not, You took the time to Inform me of your Valueable time . But The time you took to right that wasnt Benefitial or Valuable Whatsoever. Chump. . . :roll:
Evidently spelling and coherency of thought aren't your finer virtues.
Im going to change my Response up due to some things i have seen. One You Post Pointless & Meaningless Replys to topic like "No thanks" for one example on the Wooah!! Topic Eddie made.

And your time is valuable? Seems like you have nothing better to do my man, Also not everyone is going to be at University level in the English Vocabulary like you, Posting Big Ass Confusing words & Shit. Im Only 18 Mr. Grammar Police.

Maybe you qualifying yourself on here is how you get by , Non of my Concern Honestly. You Just Seem to Linger around and are of No Use, Like you'd Beat around the Bush if you were going to even attempt to answer something.

Continue Slapping Posters with English Books & Do what you Do best on here, Serve & Correct. :lol:

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Bump, Would really like to see your responses & Study where that Mindset you guys have came from . S lets see it guys i know you got something !

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Obviously Not, You took the time to Inform me of your Valueable time . But The time you took to right that wasnt Benefitial or Valuable Whatsoever. Chump. . . :roll:
Evidently spelling and coherency of thought aren't your finer virtues.
Im going to change my Response up due to some things i have seen. One You Post Pointless & Meaningless Replys to topic like "No thanks" for one example on the Wooah!! Topic Eddie made.

And your time is valuable? Seems like you have nothing better to do my man, Also not everyone is going to be at University level in the English Vocabulary like you, Posting Big Ass Confusing words & Shit. Im Only 18 Mr. Grammar Police.

Maybe you qualifying yourself on here is how you get by , Non of my Concern Honestly. You Just Seem to Linger around and are of No Use, Like you'd Beat around the Bush if you were going to even attempt to answer something.

Continue Slapping Posters with English Books & Do what you Do best on here, Serve & Correct. :lol:
Still talking like I give a fuck.


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PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2012 7:56 am 
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hey man, you're doing fairly ok, the only thing that seems to stand out is the frame in this interaction, right now you have this frame you're stregthening that you and this girl are catatonic friends, this is some nice guy style shit going on, she probably finds you somewhat attractive or she wouldn't bother with you (unless you both have an insane amount of comfort), but you should stop beating around the bush with all this dis-qualification and baiting her to qualify, your post says she has known you for years, at this point she knows for sure if she would sleep with you or not, talking about sex is good and all that, but you should try to be a bit more productive and take things beyond talking, start trying to change this into a frame of ''you and I and how we are into each other'', rather then ''we're good friends, lets talk about you and your boyfriends, and me with my girlfriends''

she obviously isn't interested in qualifying herself for you, give her some interest or something to work with, so she feels more secure about investing in you and start building compliance, you want her to feel like you like her but could take it or leave it at any time (don't be too over-eager or needy)

anyways, don't invest your stock too heavily into this one, you have known her for years and it might be tricky to change a mind that is already made up, but worth a shot if you are interested, just be a tad more bold and start framing these interactions me and you, rather then you and random guys, and me and random girls (unless you have some sort of social proof you are trying to use to get her jealous, but in this case you best actually have the means and not care to lose her)


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Yep I agree with Pump.

You were talking about sex with other people etc. I woulda gone for something along the lines of, "well I might have to give you a shot sometime and work out a rating for ya in bed."

She goes, "haha you wish...."

You go "nah im serious if you wanna know how good you are I can tell ya, Lets hook up sat night(or what ever)".

Obviously in the way you talk.

Then you know if it's going to happen, less beating around the bush and shit. Cos beating round the bush leads to friendzone.


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You should fix your grammer and spelling, that will help. I didn't read the whole thing but from what I did read, I would have tried to be more direct, like Lbot said. Don't spend too much time on facebook, get her number quick and take it to the phone and/or set up a plan to meet her in person. The sooner the better.


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First off i'd like to say thanks to all of you for the feedback !So Now I'll go down my List in Response to each of you .

But quickly i'd like to ask ALL of you in a whole. . & ANYONE who is reading to answer this one. You Tell me your Opinion on my style pretty much, And what you'd do to Quirk it, & I Like that . But at What points in the Convo did you see an Oppurtunity of were you caught yourselves saying "Damnn he shoulda said this instead" or "I would have said this right there" Etc Etc. . For example, the part where she said "You Didnt get that good pussy yet" or something like that .

Anyways. . .

@Pumpington - Yeah i understand right on what you mean, its normally not in my nature to be 'in-direct' I'm usually the Asshole Yeah yeah whatever Direct type . I wasnt on point I guess you can say during this interaction.

I also didnt want to Give her direct intrest either, i feel like were both stubborn on trying to be the more dominant, Well she is atleast, i also fealt the amount of text i was responding with showed enough intrest to begin with, Normally i write a couple words or a short sentence .

But yeah i'll end up seeing her & fucking her evidently, But thats not the point & For those reading this, Just because i know im going to fuck this broad. i still want to learn from this interaction, So continue shareing !

@LBot - I think i did alright steering it Sexually, i Brought up how She isnt getting Fucked Good enough to put it bluntly. . She said Blah Blah after, & i Tested her Saying / Asking "So you think your some top notch amazing fuck ? " thats the vibe i was getting from her. She didnt bite correctly. I think she could have been more sexual in response to that, Giving me an Oppurtunity to Edge it further, almost like she wasnt working with me. Know what im saying?

So would you say its me or Her here? & what have you said in Certain areas diffrently?

@Kajinn - Like i said thats how we talk this age, On Computers at least . But maybe you should have, I just seen her on & chatted her, it was late at night & i had time to talk. Of course i have her number & could text, But that'd be pointless when she's up on Facebook & I can type at ease on a Keyboard then UnderSized Touch-Screen Keys . But Thanks anyways, & Yes I'll be Going to a beach party with her this Sat, I'll end up fucking her there for sure.

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Evidently spelling and coherency of thought aren't your finer virtues.
Im going to change my Response up due to some things i have seen. One You Post Pointless & Meaningless Replys to topic like "No thanks" for one example on the Wooah!! Topic Eddie made.

And your time is valuable? Seems like you have nothing better to do my man, Also not everyone is going to be at University level in the English Vocabulary like you, Posting Big Ass Confusing words & Shit. Im Only 18 Mr. Grammar Police.

Maybe you qualifying yourself on here is how you get by , Non of my Concern Honestly. You Just Seem to Linger around and are of No Use, Like you'd Beat around the Bush if you were going to even attempt to answer something.

Continue Slapping Posters with English Books & Do what you Do best on here, Serve & Correct. :lol:
Still talking like I give a fuck.
Obviously, Your Still replying, Thats cute . Sorry to be a Heartbreak for you but. . . Fuck off Your not a Value to my time . Bye ! :lol:

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My method is to to do a bit of light teasing and sexual escalation just enough to get that into the back of her mind to stop LJBF creeping in and she see's me as a sexual being and not someone who will go shopping with her.

After organising a date. I'll go back to work on comfort briefly. During date I'm escalating kino which builds the attraction up some more and gives me an idea if I'm wasting my time or not.

I just think Talking about sex the way you 2 were ends up turning into building comfort too high. Or as I see on these forums ends up with them not replying to messages anymore because the girl is incapable of finding a way to switch the topic back to something fresh when she is bored of the current conversation.

I'm not really going to read back through the OP but when you said the top notch fuck/her talking about you not having A grade pussy or what ever then I would have gone in direct.

At that point your not talking about blah blah emotions so your not going to lose attraction. You show intent on what you want.
You say she wasn't biting? You go direct she has to bite or show you that you should move on... I mean this is one girl...

Go to a mall or party get some numbers rinse and repeat.

I'm tired at the moment so this probably made fuck all sense but it's all I really have to offer on this topic.


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