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PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2014 12:42 am 
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Recently met this girl who is my friend's sister and 3 years younger. Haha it's crazy but oh well.
Much criticism and helpful tips would be appreciated. Thanks!

7/1, 7:11pm
Me: Shut up
(lame ass opener but oh well it worked and got her attention)
7/1, 7:12pm
Girl: Tf ? Lol

7/1, 7:12pm
Me: Ur not grounded for the whole summerr
(based off her fb status of her being grounded)
7/1, 7:13pm
Girl: Oh yes I am

7/1, 7:13pm
Me: Haha wow. Well it was nice meeting ya

7/1, 7:14pm
Girl: *****s mom showed up at my house around 2am looking for ***** (her friend) and then my parents found out I wasn't at *****s (her friend) all night. But yaaa you too.

7/1, 7:15pm
Me: She was with ******
(my friend)
7/1, 7:16pm
Girl: Yeeah I know that's what I told her motherr. I still got screwed

7/1, 7:16pm
Me: Thats what you get for being naughty

7/1, 7:17pm
Girl: Lmao yeeeah I totally deserve to be grounded all summer

7/1, 7:19pm
Me: Lol have fun spending the next 2 months stuck in a house

7/1, 7:22pm
Girl: :((

7/1, 7:23pm
Me: Aw ill plan a prison break for u

7/1, 7:33pm
Girl: Do itttt

7/1, 7:35pm
Me: Haha ill bring a rope so u can sneak out through ur window

7/1, 7:36pm
Girl: When I sneak out I just go through the back door neverr been caught

7/1, 7:37pm
Me: Well u got caught last night dummyyyy

7/1, 7:37pm
Girl:Not sneakin out thouuuuuhghghh
And it was bc of Emmys momm

7/1, 7:38pm
Me: Sneak out for me

7/1, 7:39pm
Girl: Pfff I would but everyone's goin to a concert

7/1, 7:39pm
Me: Yeah im going to it sooon

7/1, 7:40pm
Girl: That's awesomeeeeee

7/1, 7:42pm
Me: Hell yeahh

7/1, 7:53pm
Me: (her name) ill let you know how crazy ****** is going to be! Try not to miss me too much

7/1, 7:55pm
Girl: Lol il try

7/2 12:08am
Me: ***** (some music artist) is a god

7/2 12:09am
Girl: Damn you iz lucky !

7/2 12:10am
Me: Im always lucky! I wuz in the 2nd row

7/2 12:12am
Girl: Whhaaaat craYyy

7/2 12:13am
Me: Haha there were a lot of black chiks! You would have wuved it

7/2 12:14am
Girl: Hahahah yAa black chick are my favvv
Chicks**

12:19am
Me: Hahaha well hiii my name is shaniqua

12:20am
Girl: Hahaha rAcisttttt

12:20am
Me: Im the baddest chick in town! One hunnnet!

12:23am
Girl: Lmaooo

12:37am
Me: Haha im just kiddin. *****s (her friend) more bout dat lYfe

12:38am
Girl: Lol I guess

12:39am
Me: So wtf happened last night
She msged me over fb for ***** (my friend) numbrr

12:39am
Girl: Soo lol

12:40am
Me: Hahh im just wondering

12:40am
Girl: Nun really happened at the apartment

12:40am
Me: She had to apologize?

12:40am
Girl: Forrr?

12:41am
Me: Thats what she said this morning to me
"fuckin dude, can u give me that boys number the one with the apt? some shit happened, n i needa apologize!! msg me when u get this" (copied and pasted her friend's msg to me)

12:41am
Girl:Oh
Her mom yelled at him lol

12:47am
Me: Hahaha classssic
Is her mom scarier than her?

12:52am
Girl: Her mom is super chillll

12:53am
Me: Damn im gonna go party with her mom then
Hopefully she wont ever yell at me

12:55am
Girl: I think she apologized after yelling at ****** (my friend). Idk if she apologized to him or to Emmy thougggh

12:58am
Me: Ha goood! Poor ****** lol he had to goto work early that mournkmg
Mourning

12:59am
Girl: Ohh where does he work ?

1:00am
Me: Some body shop for cars

1:00am
Girl: Ohhhh sweet

1:00am
Me: Sweeter than a box of chocolates

1:01am
Girl: Hahahahah okay

1:02am
Me: If u could be any food or candy what would u be
(LOL I had nothing else good to talk about)
1:02am
Girl: Whaaat

1:02am
Me: Lol learn to read

1:03am
Girl: Hahahaha I don't want to be a food

1:03am
Me: But u have to

1:03am
Girl: No I don't

1:03am
Me: Say its the end of the world

1:03am
Girl: Lmmao no

1:03am
Me: U have to be some foox
Yeah u do
Dont even start this with me

1:04am
Girl: Hahahaha you first
Sassy

1:04am
Me: I think u would be a water melon

1:04am
Girl: I are sassyy

1:04am
Me: Or kool aid
Or kfc chicken
My goddd that sounds so delicous

1:04am
Girl: Lol why

1:05am
Me: Thats the ordeal diet for black people
(joking no offense to black people)
1:05am
Girl: Oh jeezz lol

1:06am
Me: U are whatchu eat nigguh

1:06am
Girl: I cantttt

1:06am
Me: U cant think of anything funny?? ;(

1:07am
Girl: Naww my bad

1:07am
Me: Pshh ur sassy and boringg

1:08am
Girl: ThNk ️chuuu and goodnight
(wtf? shit test?)
1:09am
Me:what?
im just kiddin
ur fun to be around with
(sounds so needy/desperate...)
1:10am
Girl: Awe really that means a lot

1:10am
Me: even tho im a dick to you?

1:11am
Girl: Are you serious ? I don't think you're a sick to me. Are you trying to be lmao
Dick** goddamnit

1:11am
Me: haha hell no im just addicted to having to much fun and cant tell if i take it too far sometime
too
im pretty healthy too and not sick

1:12am
Girl: Hahahaha
Good to knowww

1:13am
Me: my mile time is like 15 minutes
so impressive

1:18am
Girl: Oooo why u trying to impress me
Going to bed night
(she closed the convo)
1:24am
Me: goood night!


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PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2014 3:47 am 
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It's fine for the most part a bit lengthy and drags on. End on a high note. Other than that its fine just all that stuff, role playing, qualifying etc means nothing if you don't get the girl out. Focus on setting up a date, you've got the idle banter down and its fun but only for a time at which point you just become nice 'pen pals'

A bit too jokey too, don't be afraid to switch it up to keep YOU entertained. I think you're going at the jokes a bit far sometimes it just gets obnoxious and can even become transparent you're trying to impress. Be ok switching to serious or whatever, don't always have to try and make her laugh.


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PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2014 4:08 am 
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It's fine for the most part a bit lengthy and drags on. End on a high note. Other than that its fine just all that stuff, role playing, qualifying etc means nothing if you don't get the girl out. Focus on setting up a date, you've got the idle banter down and its fun but only for a time at which point you just become nice 'pen pals'

A bit too jokey too, don't be afraid to switch it up to keep YOU entertained. I think you're going at the jokes a bit far sometimes it just gets obnoxious and can even become transparent you're trying to impress. Be ok switching to serious or whatever, don't always have to try and make her laugh.
Sir, thank you so much! I am having trouble on setting up dates because I'm afraid I'll look desperate/needy. How should I start a conversation when I'm trying to set up a meet. And also during a meet what should I be aiming at? Objectively, I want the girl to chase me but I'm clueless on when to make a move without being rejected. OH and also I have this problem a lot where either my friends or her friends are always around when we hang out so how do I form a one on one isolation with the girl when making a move?


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It's fine for the most part a bit lengthy and drags on. End on a high note. Other than that its fine just all that stuff, role playing, qualifying etc means nothing if you don't get the girl out. Focus on setting up a date, you've got the idle banter down and its fun but only for a time at which point you just become nice 'pen pals'

A bit too jokey too, don't be afraid to switch it up to keep YOU entertained. I think you're going at the jokes a bit far sometimes it just gets obnoxious and can even become transparent you're trying to impress. Be ok switching to serious or whatever, don't always have to try and make her laugh.
Sir, thank you so much! I am having trouble on setting up dates because I'm afraid I'll look desperate/needy. How should I start a conversation when I'm trying to set up a meet. And also during a meet what should I be aiming at? Objectively, I want the girl to chase me but I'm clueless on when to make a move without being rejected. OH and also I have this problem a lot where either my friends or her friends are always around when we hang out so how do I form a one on one isolation with the girl when making a move?
Here's the thing, to get her to CHASE you you need to abandon the idea that you NEED this one girl.

You got the role play stuff down, you can easily segway that into a meet. There are many opportunities to do this. You gotta be fearless with women (but ALWAYS respectful - remember if a woman respects and feels comfortable with you, she'll be far more inclined to be sexual with you too). Rejection is always a possibility but really that can be said about anything. Do you let that rejection impede you from ever advancing with a girl? Take risks, its attractive.


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I'm so calling you and asking if Shaniqua's there.

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