So, I'm fairly new to all this game stuff and I'm still pretty young (20 this year) but I thought it would be fun to improve on it and get some advice from people who probably know heaps more than I do or just people on roughly the same journey as me.

Anyways, recently I made a profile on this 'meet up' site, sending out pretty simple messages to girls and quite a fair number of responses. Now I don't know if I'm the best looking guy in the world (I don't think I'd even be able to rate myself to be honest, I'm clueless ) so I have no idea how my looks are affecting the responses I get, but I was wondering if I could improve my response rate just by improving my profile alone.

Here's how it goes: (Note these sections are kind of mandatory such as music, movies, best feature etc)

Name: !runawaylittlegirl
Tagline: I'm a bit of a c*nt

About Me:

Music:Arctic Monkys, Eminem, Maroon 5, Ed Sheeran, usually popular stuff.

Movies:I love a great story! Comedies, Super hero movies anything that's not horror, I like sleeping at night. Oh if you manage to convince me to watch a rom-com you're probably really good with your mouth or at least a wizard

TV:Stand up, Goggle Box, Cartoons like Spongebob, Adventure Time, Family Guy, South Park

Books:Whatever my friends recommend me.

Sports:Mixed Martial Arts, Thai Boxing, general fitness

Interests:Sliding my fingers across this wooden thing with strings on it and sounds come out, pretending I can sing, cool guy stuff

Dreams:I have a HUGE ambition to be a singer song writer

Best Features:Just my face, body, personality and values, everything else needs improvement!

About Me:London bred, Birmingham raised. I can offer good looks, charming wit, sarcasm and a good time, it's not much but it's all I've got woman! I know what I want and I have no hesitation going after it. Tired of boring girls, show me someone spontaneous, intelligent, but not a know it all, fun loving and light hearted and I'll you'll definitely be on my mind Just PLEASE don't be a complete weirdo

First date:A drink somewhere casual and public so I can run away if you're crazy, big laughs, cheeky looks and smiles and then whatever happens next. The modern day fairy tale! ----
Ps: No sex on the first date, so don't even try it..

I think it's fairly simple and I can't link you to the site as I'm a new member. There's a quite a few selfies on there so I'll have to have a think about that but thoughts, opinions and critiques are all welcome. Cheers!

-Chu