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My opinion is that it is a very bad opening.
You are asking for dating advice to a girl showing how clueless and not comfortable about how you look and your dating life, and then you reveal that it was just a manipulative set up to ask her for a date.
Nobody likes to feel manipulated and you are not giving any value to her you are just taking value out of her...
Indirect game works as if you did not plan to pick up her, but after listening from her and getting to know her personality you start finding her attractive. It works with the "I did not plan it, it just happened" principle.
to make it work I would change your last question to something like:
"OMG you are friendly and have almost the same idea of how a perfect date should look like... Would I become a really bad boy if I cancel my date and go out with you instead?"
That is an awesome critique man. I agree, that is a better way to close.
All of the other comments are great too! I wouldn't have followed it word for word the way i wrote it, I would make it sound less pick-upy. But I would also hope no one would take any opener and reuse it word for word, when they could (and should) make it their own by changing up the wording.