Please critique my profile, general advice please I'm kinda new to online game:

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=42974031

Thanks

Hey, your profile is very good, but as always it can be better:)

Travelling is your hobby, so maybe upload pics from your travels. Your profile shows that you have good looks and that women like you. IMHO, upload one or two more pics that show you have exciting life and money.

I think that if you put that you dont like attractive dumb girls ......they actually wont message you even though you might be trying to use reverse psychology to get their attention.

don't talk about your job and all that then girls that do message you will be looking for a sugar daddy provider fellow.

Your pictures look like you are the life of the party and people want to be around you and you look like you have charisma......yet you are on pof? that same thing will pop into a girls mind. hint more on the sexual side with a kind of teasing profile and you will get more messages.

and put up positive qualifiers instead of bad ones because women will automatically want to be part of the good ones

eg)
"To be honest, pretty girls with nothing intelligent to say for themselves are BORING and a waste of my time!"

try to revise this into just ......if you can hold an intelligent conversation we will get along very well.

That way she sees that looks are not part of it and pretty chicks will attempt to actually keep a good conversation in order to qualify them self to you. and it conveys the same message but in a indirect way.