So first off, I'm curious if most of the same concepts work for talking to someone online. On a more spacific note, I saw a supermodels page on a dating website and this is the line I used.
Hey, I'm -insert name here-. Very nice pics. If I wasn't gay you'd so be mine. I'd tell you a bit about myself but I wrote a lot on my about me section. You should check it out and if there's anything you want to know just ask.
It was filled out enough and had enough pics to look legit instead of one of those scams. I'd probably fall just under her radar on looks and I was just testing this stuff out but anyway, I was hoping someone might be willing to pick apart my approach and help me out. I'm new btw.

Oh, and what do I say if she responds. "Your gay?"

She is not even going to respond.

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Oh! You've gotta be kidding me!

could you give some feedback as to why?

First off all I really doubt a "super model" needs to be in a dating site.

And to be honest, her inbox will be full of creeps. I doubt that she would even have the courage to go all those message.

A model goes out to the club stay in a corner and in a time of 20 minutes 100 guys will aproach or will be in the proximity trying to... .

So I dont see why she would respond. To that type of opener which in my opinion sucks .

Does type of girls are used to everyone and everything.

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Oh! You've gotta be kidding me!

I figured the chances where low. I'm just trying things out. at any rate, I'm looking more for critique on my line I used. like "you shouldn't have told her to check you out, let her do it on her own" which came to mind after I sent the message. Oh, and to clarify, She says she makes a living taking photo's and modeling but never said anything about being a supermodel. -my bad-