If you dont want to read the first few paragraphs, dont cuz its just back story and i dont think it matters too much. I'm mainly putting it up so curious ppl can read it and to practice storytelling in general. I've read its a good confidence booster and is good for DHV.
Anyway, I met this HB8 at the club with her friend HB5 who actually got more guys than her haha. idk. I was a photographer and she came up to me. We took pictures of each other and then she was reaching in my pants for my phone. she gave me her number and literally followed me around all night. When she had to leave, she found me, grabbed my face, and kissed me. haha
I text her a few days later like hey whats up
2 weeks after fisrt encounter (saturday night). i ask her out. she flakes. she said she had a party to go to and was like "i'll see i we can go" but never texted me
2 days later (tonight) i text her:
Me: Was that party crackin?
HB8: It wasnt at all I just got drunk and that was the party for me
Me: Meet any super awesome guys that you could have tea and crumpets with?
[I was calling myself a super awesome guy earlier (callback?? it worked though) and the tea and crumpets was how i asked her out. i thought crumpets sounded kinda silly and different]
HB8: Yea but u never txt me back so I can never have tea with this awesome guy

Me: Dont forget the crumpets

HB8: Oh yeah and the crumpets
Me: Well i figured you would text me

hehe
HB8: aha funny

Me: Well lets go tonight.
HB8: I had a rough week I'm looking to go out for awhile
[i figured she meant to say not looking but i came back with...]
Me: Come pick me up then. I'm on my skateboard right now.

[DHV?]
HB8: I meant to say not looking to go out.. I'm sorry
freeze, say "it's okay", or how long do i wait. And dont forget to critique. Thanks guys.