Last Friday, I went out drinking with a friend. We ended up going to a club hammered. I began testing out David Deangelo's cocky and funny on different girls inside the club. When the club ended, I spoke to this semi drunk girl by telling her how stuck up she was, it went a bit like this.

Me: Hey, beauty isnt everything you know that? it comes down to personality at the end, do you agree?
Her: I know that?
Me: Do you? Because right now you seem a bit of a stuck up, am I right?
Her: Hahaha, No im not.
Me: Tell me. Are you outgoing or reserved?
Her: umm outgoing?
Me: I doubt it, you seem a bit reserved. How about we carry on this conversation over the phone?
Her: Im not giving you my phone number?
Me: That's fine, I just wanted to see if you really are a stuck up, you just answered your own question, right? Why cant we be friends first?
Her: Sure
Me: Add me then send me a text. (She adds me and sends me a text saying hi)

ONE WEEK LATER
Me: Steph, im guessing your clubbing, I bet it's not your real name isnt it?
Her: Who is this??
Me: Im surprised. You dont remember do you?
Her: I switched phones!
Me: Wait how did you switch phones. I think you're lying, they say all girls love to lie in Maxim.
Her: Haha are you gonna tell me your name haha I switched blackberrys
Me: Are you going to say please
Her: Please
Me: Youre demanding arent you? But you did say please. My name is T.
Me: Im just playing, Im Tim, I met you at the club
Her: Lol Ahhh
Me: What are you doing right now?
Her: Im at a friends house drinking wine lol
Me: I bet you youre stretching the truth a bit. Youre actually at home reading Cosmos, am I right?
Her: Hahaha naw
Me: Anyways chat later, got to go.

NEXT DAY
Me: Hi,
Her: Hi
Me:Remember I asked about your personality type at the club? But then again you were pretty smashed
Her: Hahahahah I dont remember sorry LOL
Me: You dont remember! Wow.. then I guess I wont refresh your memory about that night
Her: Hahahaha sorry!!!!
Me:You better be sorry, because what you did nevermind
Her: Haha I know I didnt do anything. I just dont remember what I said
Me: So you do remember! Youre partially right you didnt do anything. Let me quiz you on your personality, are you ready? Tell me if im right or wrong
Her: Haha ok
Me: Are you outgoing?
Her: Sometimes
Me: Which one is more you, assertive or laid back?
Her: Laid back? Lol
Me: Before moving forward, why are you still awake, isnt it past your bed time?
Her:I dont have a bedtime haah but im so sleepy haha only had 8hrs of sleep the past 2 days
Me: Okay sleep is for the weak, i got to go, chat again
Her: Huh
Me: nvm, im kinda busy with friends, i got to go night.

4 HOURS LATER
Me: still awake?
Her: No response


Hey guys this will be my first pick up, any critique, feedback, help or anything you guys would do next will help a lot! I didnt speak to her yet, this is the last text I sent her.

Thanks,
LordTenki

Its obvious this girl barely remembers you and you aren't really getting anywhere. NEXT HER

AFC#2 - Train
I was being loud and obnoxious and then I tried selling these headphones to a guy next to me. One girl with a hoody over her head says:

Hoody Girl: I sell too
Me: Do you now?
HG: I sell hats, i've been pushing hats all day with my friend at the store.
Me: I think you're a liar, I can tell you're making this up.
HG: I did! I sold some hats to some guys coming in
Me: So you're telling me you pushed a cart all day but now you're telling me your selling to some guy coming in? I think your lying.
HG: My friend here is a liar!
Me: Your friend looks like an honest type, she looks away everytime you say something. Dont try to con me girl, your twinkle in your eye doesnt help ither.
HG: She really is the liar!
Me: This is my stop whats your name?
HG: Lisa
Me: Im Tim nice to meet you
HG: do you have facebook. Add me im Lisa Smith

Any feedback? or Critique?

Why go for Facebook when you can get her #? Facebook is a shitty contact compared to a phone number you can call or text. You've met in person don't digress to online.

I agree if honest your best getting a number.

Reasons:

Phone game you can delay text's act busy much easier.

Facebook is instant messaging loads of effort in my mind. Especially when you can use phone game and or directly meet up with them for some sort of date.

But keep it up any contact is good! can always get her num over facebook etc. Loving the negs on the previous topics. Try to build more of a connection when you meet the girls in the club. If you don't build a connection the number will be a flake she won't often remember you.

In order to build a connection I suggest moving her around the club. Get a drink, go to the next room etc. Makes the girl remember and feel she's been with you for ages often works wonders. Good luck, My reply is my view I'm not anywhere close to perfect or right! so take with a pinch of salt haha.

nice...
nice C&F line...good improvise
kinda reminds me Hank Moody C&F.

just built connection and get her phone.
keep the good work...

JSmooth - Thanks for the feedback. She doesn't remember, ill make sure to remind her next time.

relaxx - you're right I should have number closed right after instead of leaving it to Facebook.

Grizbull - Thanks, you got it! I will try that building a better connection and # closing

AFC#3 - University Party

I started drinking with a few friends. Got a bit tipsy. Went to the dance floor, saw a girl with glasses and started to dance with her. She moved away. I grabbed her hand and pulled her towards me. She pushed me off and then I told her:

Me: You know what.. you're scared to be around guys, are you?
Her: Just around you
Me: Okay fine, im gone (walk away from her)

15 Minutes later (drink drink drink)
See her dancing by herself with her arms crossed. I mimic her boding language and tease her a bit.

Me: you know what you're body language is telling me?
Her: What?
Me: You're introverted. do you know why?
Her: Why.
Me: your arms are crossed and you're afraid to talk to men on the dance floor, you following me?
Her: No im not!
Me: Yes you are, I gotta go
She glance at me, and I walk away.

20Minutes Later
She walks by me

Me: can't keep away right? why none of these guys are interested in you? Look relax a bit I'm not here to pick you up. I dont know you, and I wouldnt mind getting to know you. You dont like making friends?
Her: I do!
Me: then give me your number
Her: Ill give you my facebook
Me: here type it to my phone
She takes my phonee
Me: i dont want a fake name either

Got her number

Any feedback or critiques?

Dude I love that you're going for it. From what I read you have balls and don't take shit from girls. Just like it should be.
You're rushing just a little. I think if you ease up a bit, you can be golden. Are you kino escalating and creating sexual tension? If not you should.

Also, after you get a number, build COMFORT! And make a reason for meeting up. Otherwise she will flake. Easy as that.

Good points!