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PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 6:19 pm 
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You might have seen this on another area of the forum but I'm trying to get as much help as possible. I hope this isn't too long but the details are important, right?

So last night I linked up with few other Toronto PUAs and 3 HB8s (they were friends/girlfriends). In line I opened a 3 set of an HB8, HB5 & HB9 after one my wings insulted them I came in to kind of joke about it (pretending not to know him). I ran a few routines while in line and told them that I had to meet up with my friends but they should have a good night. Later on the HB8 saw me in the bar and opened me with an inside joke we had shared in line. She re-introduced me to her friends and this time I started to notice serious IOIs from her.

HB8: What do you do in Toronto besides picking up hot women from bars, mr player?
Me: Hey, don't hate, it's a gift...(they laughed) Anyways, I work at A&F as a model.
HB8: Nice, ooh a model huh I can see that. (She started playing with her hair)

I told them a few funny stories about my douchie model co-workers. Negged Hb8 about her age. Then I told them I had to get back to my friends again and if they're lucky I'll see them later. We talked for another 5mins before I actually left. A little later I saw the girls again and I asked one the HB8s in our group to be my pivot and create a jealousy plotline by flirting with me, she did. (they were watching me) After a few minutes I heard them calling my name and so I went over & this time the HB8 wanted to introduce me to her HB8.5 sister.

HB8.5: Hey! I'm (name) I work at...right next to A&F, we're neighbours! (she smiled)
Me: Cool, I like your teeth but they kinda remind of Bugs Bunny, they're cute though!
HB8.5: (She laughed) Your such an asshole!

I know it's canned material but the Bugs Bunny neg works like a charm it was a running joke the whole night. I also negged her about the Jersey Shore (she's Italian) After a few routines I started to build kino by playing thumb war, I cheated to win. This time I gave her a false time constraint about my friends calling me but then told the group that they seemed cool so they could come and join us at our table. This was great because I had a better chance to isolate her by putting my friends in between us and her friends.

I think the weakest part of my game is building kino because while I managed to get compliance to hold her hand & touch her back I didn't really manage to make it more sexually charged. The other thing is she didn't want to do anything in front of her sister plus I didn't know any dark corners of the pub I tried the do you think you're a good kisser, I don't believe you prove it, gambit. And she was receptive but didn't want to do anything in front of her sister. I tried a little later by saying you look like you want to kiss me right now and she didn't respond and smiled but when I touched her chin and tried to lean in she pulled away...I think this is where I went wrong because I should have just #closed and gone to look for other targets but I stayed mainly because I didn't want to leave her while my wingmen were gaming her friends. (Any ideas on what I should have done?) Anyways, we flirted a little and she gave me her number without me asking (I joked with her about giving her the 3day rule and she begged me to break it) the bar closed and her friends wanted to go home.
I also read in the MM not to follow any 3day rule so I texted her today.

Me: Hey Bugsy, it's Rico. Stop thinking about me. ;)
HB8.5: Rico Suave! I thought I got the 3 day rule...Not so Mr. Cocky noww huh

I wanted to text game her a little then set up a meet. but I messed up here because I didn't see her text and ended up not replying for 4hours. So it was too late to set up a meet by then.

Me: I'm still cocky, you just got lucky (no pun intended) I should become a singer though, you can do my background vocals lol

I mentioned the singer thing because she told me she sings but was too shy to sing for me last night and now I'm waiting for a reply. So guys what do you think any and all criticism is welcome.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 6:21 pm 
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Update: She replied and we had a very flirtatious chat texting.

HB8.5: lol oh? The thing is I don't havee to become a singer it comes naturally.. So if you want to team up you must be the one in luck Mr. Bruno Mars (I was wearing a fedora last night)
Me: Pretty confident words from "Ms. I'm too shy to sing right now" :P When you audition don't feel nervous I promise to be a little nicer than Simon Cowell
HB8.5: Haha Thanks..appreciate it. But in my defence I didn't want to draw in a crowd and make you feel left out. That's how good I am :p
Me: lol We'll just see how good you really are ;) So if you had nothing to do on a Mon evening which witty, handsome, cocky yet sensitive black guy lol would you want to have drinks with?
HB8.5: Neyo?
Me: lol Wrong...try again ;)
HB8.5: (My name)? ;)
Me: You win! We should meet up at Philthy Mcnasty's tomorrow at 9pm (it's not as Mcnasty as it sounds)
HB8.5: Hah ya I've heard of it. Possibly I might be working tomorrow, unlike some ppl ;)

How was I supposed to respond to that?

Update: Update:
Me: Don't hate I have another job it's called being awesome. Live a little. lol
HB8.5: Ahhaha that's not a job it's a lifestyle..I would know I share it with you! Text me tmrw!

(At this point I wanted to flip it on her to make her text me first tomorrow but this is the best i could come up with)

Me:haha Nice...A lifestyle I'm stealing that ;) I'm gonna be with some friends tomorrow till the evenin so text me when u get off of work. Bugsy (bunny)
HB8.5: haha I thought nigerians were the stealers..(inside joke we shared last night) you sure your aren't of that decent? ps. Is that reeeally my nickname now :(
Me: lol Aaaaw a sad smiley...I'm mean aren't I? :P Don't worry we'll come up with somethin better the next time we're together. I think we're pretty creative people...
HB8.5: We are :) sounds good to me cause Bugs is hurting! Hah ttyl hombre

That's it and honestly I'm not quite sure which direction to take it from here...I was kind of thinking that if she doesn't text me back today I'm going to wait 2 - 3 days before I make contact again. What do you think?

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sounds good so far. If you're a model from AF then you shouldnt have an excuse for not fclosing on the first date. Text her the day of and tell her time and place. Dont ask if she's avail, just tell her to be there. Early on during the date, use your natural swag or if you prefer canned material, use the cube game to cold read her. The thing works amazingly and shock and awes the person when you use it early. Everytime i've done it, it's always been first date fclose. Start demonstrating high values and dont overdue the sexual flirting. Give her some then take it away, then give her some more. Not a constant stream of it. However if you have solid frame, you can just feed her sexual energy and bang her in 20 mins. Depends on you.

Escalate and go in for kclose... then see if she wants to get out of there. From what you posted and what you describe, I think it'll be a easy night. Gluck and post results!


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Don't text, call.


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wrong thread haha


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sounds good so far. If you're a model from AF then you shouldnt have an excuse for not fclosing on the first date.
Thanks for the encouraging feedback I'm definitely going to try the cube game on our next date. I'm a part-time model for A&F but it's not the glamorous posing in catalogues type. It's the be a sales associate while wearing the clothes from the catalogues (that we have to pay for) type. lol I'm good looking but not tall enough for actual modelling.
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Don't text, call.
I've seen it so many times on the forum that I should call I feel like my inner game isn't tight enough and I'll DLV by sounding nervous and shit. I'm definitely going to improve my phone game soon and be more confident especially after my first fclose with PUA.

update she texted me:
HB8.5: So. Good news is I talked you up to the manager at Costa and she's interested. (welcome) Bad news is I'm bailing tonight to hang out with my friend before she goes to portugal.

With the whole job thing we had a conversation about how many shifts we get per week and she told me that I should get a job at her workplace. I didn't ask her to do all that with boss.

I decided not to text her back tonight and reply tomorrow saying: Thanks, you didn't haven't to do that... It's cool, I didn't see your text until late, I was out.
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