hey guys. i just copied and pasted a conversation off of my phones text messaging. can you guys critique it for me? thanks. her name is audrea but she is using lacey (her sisters) phone. and i am david. thanks guys.

hey this is aundrea

4 hours agoLacey Lou
please dont let my family scare you away. I'm so sorry .this is why i dont date any more.because my family and i end up scaring them off. understand he you dont want to talk to me. he i were you i wouldn't either . sorry

4 hours agoLacey Lou
11 11

3 hours agoDavid Sparger
its ok. ill still talk to u. are u still on?

3 hours agoLacey Lou
when ever you get on i would like to talk to you - aundrea

3 hours agoDavid Sparger
im on.

3 hours agoLacey Lou
yeah im still on lol :')

3 hours agoDavid Sparger
how u doin? lol.

3 hours agoLacey Lou
had better days lol thanks . just a little upset lol

3 hours agoDavid Sparger
that sucks. so what all happened?

3 hours agoLacey Lou
my parents just have of a really long talk and then yelled a little. had a hard time not trying to cry. but did. your a really good guy . thanks for sticking by

3 hours agoDavid Sparger
its cool. but how long do u think ull be grounded?

3 hours agoLacey Lou
idk i dont think it will be that long maybe 2 3 weeks. GOD wat im i talking about that is so long. i think they want to meet you. im talking to my dad tonight about it.

3 hours agoDavid Sparger
tell me how that goes.

2 hours agoLacey Lou
just me i will lol you no your pictures are really cute on your facebook lol. but your cuter in person

2 hours agoDavid Sparger
oh thank u. lol i feel special now.

2 hours agoLacey Lou
i hope thats not weird to say?

2 hours agoDavid Sparger
why would it be weird? lol.

2 hours agoLacey Lou
good lol i just had a really deep talk with my uncle. i didn't no if it was meant to help

2 hours agoDavid Sparger
what all did he say?

2 hours agoLacey Lou
idk why it would . i falt like i wasn't being my self today sorry

2 hours agoDavid Sparger
ya u seemed nervous. but its ok i still love u. lol

2 hours agoLacey Lou
he was saying that my emotions are controking my life right now . i didn't no wat to say to him. because it's true but it's not at the same time . that probably doesn't make since to you does it

2 hours agoDavid Sparger
no it doesnt.

2 hours agoLacey Lou
ok thats one thing i got to talk to you about ok. the word love . ever since i was a little kid i never belived in it . sorry . you don't have to say that to ok i have never said it to a guy before . so don't take to heart ok

2 hours agoDavid Sparger
ok sorry?

2 hours agoLacey Lou
i meant it is controling my life lol . stupid phone lol
its ok don't be you didn't onlol
still there hun ?

2 hours agoDavid Sparger
ya im here.

2 hours agoLacey Lou
so how was your day lol

2 hours agoDavid Sparger
it was good. urs?

2 hours agoLacey Lou
only cuz we got to hang out today but other them that i got stabbed in the back by my younger sister and got grounded again . but it was fun when it lasted.how was my popsicle lol
next time we meet or see each other i promise i'll be my self lol
BRB k

2 hours agoDavid Sparger
wait. why did she tell on u?

about an hour agoLacey Lou
im back you still there
gloria is one of those kids that will do anytim to get her ass out of trouble . I say don't talk to her.
just message me when you get back k lol

about an hour agoDavid Sparger
im back. sorry. talking to other ppl to. lol.

about an hour agoLacey Lou
understand lol . can i ask a question?

about an hour agoDavid Sparger
ya ask away.

about an hour agoLacey Lou
why do you like me? I want to give you a heads up. i have a lot of problems , well with family . i'm hard to keep up with.

about an hour agoDavid Sparger
i just think ur nice u no. like u even walked me to my car and stuff. lol. y do u like me?

about an hour agoLacey Lou
well your super nice and your cute and your actually mature not like many of the guys now and days lol u no and you listen and care
so i read the messages you and my sis wrote. daw your sweet you want to meet my family . DAW

about an hour agoDavid Sparger
ya i wanna meet them. and thank you lol.

about an hour agoLacey Lou
your so sweet. why couldn't i have met you you sooner lol

about an hour agoDavid Sparger
idk. lol. but thank you.

about an hour agoLacey Lou
yeah so i got really mad at my family and went on strike ... again . lol

about an hour agoDavid Sparger
well u dont have to be mad at them just for me. lol.

about an hour agoLacey Lou
it's not just that hun ha they don't respect me or anything that you do thats why i like you. except lacey. she gets me
my knee hurts make it feel better right meow . please . lol
i gtg time to talk to my dad sucks that i can only talk to you at night. well at least we hey to talk good night .sweetdreams

about an hour agoDavid Sparger
wait who is this?

about an hour agoLacey Lou
aundrea silly good night talk to you tomorrow

about an hour agoDavid Sparger
o i thought this was lacey cuz u said i read the messages u and my sis sent?
nite

about an hour agoLacey Lou
sweet dreams

Well, I don't even know what we should criticize about this conversation... It just seems to me that it has nothing to do with a pick-up anymore. Clearly the girl likes you and even more clearly she has all sorts of problems. How old is she anyway? Judging from what she wrote to you she seems very immature...

Admittedly my information is VERY limited here, so it would be a bit rich to give you any insights. But my feeling is: stay alpha, do not kiss up to her or anything, but do not play games with her. It seems to me that the last thing she needs is a PUA to mess with her. If you like her, then stick around and be supportive.

When was the last time you saw her?

She seems to get grounded a lot. Either she's a bad girl or that's an excuse.

I can't see anything else to talk about.

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k. thanks guys. and i may see about deleting this thread cuz my name is in it. ill probably delete it before the end of the day. and i saw her yesterday

Andres, what do u mean by dont play games with her?

like, define games?

What I meant was do not use the PUA stuff and routines just to get in her pants if you don't want to be with her. But if you actually like her as a person (rather than a hot piece of ass), then by all means do it.

My point is: we - aspiring PUAs - often use routines and strategies to get laid more. It helps us attract women, but not necessarily make women happier. It happened to me many times that I successfully juggled several (2-4) women at once. But sometimes I was a real jerk to them. They were waiting for me to call while I was screwing around. All I wanted to do was get laid regardless of the girl's feelings.

This girl you're writing about here seems to have some serious issues. It just strikes me as right to be straight with her (at least with her if not with other girls).

But take this with a grain of salt, pls - 1) I don't know you or her; 2) who am I to dish out advice? Just do whatever you feel is right for both you and her