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PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 10:15 am 
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Pics are pretty fine, but make more and more with friends and girls. This will make girls think "Wow, this guy has LOTS of friends! He must be cool..." while having pics with girls everywhere makes them think if you fuck them or not. And after that, they just jumped on he attraction-train.

The profile is kinda good. I'd stick a joke in there for every paragraph. I'm sure you can make some joke about music, or about your bike, whatever. I'd rephrase the "I'm awesome" joke, make it more obvious that you are joking.
Also, you seem a bit cookie-cutter cool-guy in your profile. Having a bike, playing guitar, booyah. These are all cool, but I think It'd spice your profile up if you mentioned a little craziness. For example, that you watch old cartoons to relax or something. If you appear "flawless", it will be harder for people to connect to you.

"I don't message people to often, but feel free to send me a message I'm always up for a good conversation and please, not more stalkers"

Delete this, and instead write: "Hit me up, I'm always up for a good conversation. No more stalkers! (Unless you are hot ;D )"

First, you are commanding, showing a strong frame, then you show you are a nice guy who likes to talk, also, the wording hints that you are intellectual type. Then it ends with a joke. It's a good line, I use it in my profiles as well.


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2011 1:29 am 
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Lets throw on the table what everybody is thinking. Online dating is not the natural way to meet somebody cold and develop a relationship. Online dating allows some people to pretend to be something they are not, for others to learn how to sell themselves in 250 words. But, it also provides a way of meeting people that you normally would never have a chance to interact with. Now that we understand that you are simply yourself and I am simply myself both on this site with the same motivations -- onto the first step, all about me!

I've been told I'm smart, handsome and going places... but whose mother doesn't say that haha. In my spare time, you will catch me making noise around the country side, at the gym, playing Ultimate or Volleyball at the beach, going on road-trips or quite possibly reading at the Coffee Shop. I enjoy a solid dose of cartoons such as robot chicken and Drawntogether -- bonus poiints to you if you know the latter.

I'm passionate about what I do for a career/school, I'm an engineer... but not the human calculator kind. I am the inquisitive mind that is always asking why and how. I believe that there is always a better way, and it can be done. Before coming to Bruce I've worked for the military but got tired of fighting with tents and mosquitos.

The look on peoples faces when I talk about the music I listen to is great... the two top genres on my computer are Metal and Trance... so different it catches people off guard haha. I'm not a top 40 kind of guy, but I can handle anything but the twang (sorry ladies, your tractor isn't sexy :P). I'm used to only writing about myself in resume's and cover-letters haha so take this all with a gain of salt. I'd like to find an equal to share my adventures it with. Take a minute or two to think about what it would be like to meet a solid guy with the same goals in mind as yourself.


Hit me up, I'm always up for a good conversation. No more stalkers! (Unless you are hot ;D )


PS: I won't date an 18 year old... unless you can build a time machine, then we'll talk
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 2:06 am 
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http://www.plentyoffish.com/viewprofile ... d=20704586

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