Oops make that 7 now! Damn! So ive gotten 4 responses on okc and 3 on pof and need 6 responses. Below are the original contact and they're response. Thoughts are appreciated!

Okc replies first

1. Me: After reading your profile, you seem like a polite, cool and a very attractive person! I'd really like the opportunity to get to know you more, and find out what else you've got going on for you than just your smile. =) I just have this feeling that you're a great person, even tho your profile's a little bare on the details. So maybe you can help fill in the blanks. 

You are welcome to message me back here or if you want you can shoot me a text.

Her: Hi. Sorry my profile is so bare, it just seems strange writing all this stuff about myself. You can ask me anything you want to. We can talk here for a bit, Im not giving my phone number yet tho. 

Response thoughts?

2.

Me: Saw you were online and wanted to drop you a note, You seem like a really easy person to talk to so let me level with you. I think you are polite, have a big heart, and are very attractive! I'd really like the opportunity to take you out for some coffee with conversation or dinner sometime. =) I just have this feeling that you're a great person and I'd like to get to know you better.

You are welcome to message me back here or if you want you can shoot me a text.

Her: Hey there! Lol, I was just fumbling around on my phone in the middle of the night the other day. I have been on winter break and this is the first time I have been on my computer in weeks! So nice! Anyway, it does look like we have a lot in common .... haha especially since I noticed you took off the "prefering redheads and brunettes" , don't you know that blondes have way more fun?! 
So how long have you been in LA?


3.

Me: I'm going to guess that you've been approached here a huge number of times... And they all do something like "Let me tell you all about me. Like I am applying for the position of the guy you are going to hang out with on Friday, or whatever." But that would be boring and dull. I might fall asleep doing that. Wait, I could list out a bunch of questions! Ask you things like what you do for fun? or maybe something really deep... something like. "So where are you from?" You'd swoon, realizing that I care about where you are from and thus 'where you're coming from'. You'd get "all a flush" at my wit, right? Oh, I know, I could just delete all of this and type "Hey wazzup? Saw your profile. Ur cute! hit me back and we can chat" That would probably work best. I mean, that's what everyone does right? So it MUST work! Shouldn't it? How about instead, I do this. I am intrigued by your profile, and think it could be worthwhile to find out more about you. You know, talk, and answer those age old questions, like: "Is she a total basket case?" "Will I fall asleep sitting next to her when we hang out?" and don't forget... "Is she just a guy with fake pictures, pretending to be a girl?!?!?" So lets interact! Sound good? Glad to hear it! Lets get creative... WE'RE GOING ON A ROADTRIP!!!! So where are we going and why? 

Her: whoa...put quite a bit of thought into this process. haha. nice

4. This one reached out to me first via :

Her: Must have caught each others eye huh? 4 or 5 star rating isn't too bad in my book : ) So have you had any luck here meeting genuinely interesting people? 
Hope to hear from you soon...

5. POF response:

Me: I can see your passionate about some things, you're enthusiastic and willing to jump out of a perfectly good plane (I am in this club as well) but other than that I don't really get a feel for you, which makes me wonder if you're naturally guarded. 

You've got a pretty smile which is what caught my attention, but beauty is very common. I'd more curious as to who are you really? What are you hopes, your dreams? Do you really know how to salsa and merengue?  Basically all the important questions.

Reply back, you've piqued my curiosity.

Her: Hello! I do have a guard... interesting you picked up on it... and no it's not because i've had terrible relationships that have made me that way. lol... I have no "woe is me" stories. Apparently it worked to get your attention though

6. This one JUST reached out to me. And she's a solid 8.5 if she looks like her pics and she's real.

Her: I'll date u lol

7. Reached out to me..

Her: Hello,how r u this evening? I read ur profile
and liked what I saw. You seem like a
really cool guy with a sense of humor and I
like that. I love to laugh,like all kinds of
music and love dogs too. If ur
interested,leave me a message back. I
hope to hear from u soon.



Thoughts and ideas?

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Your messages are absolutely horrible.
A simple: "Hey you look like the type of person that I'd get along with. How about we go out on a friendly date? ". is totally fine, and works better.
Be direct and confident.

I agree its funny I got them all from puas on here I was trying them all out to see what worked. And so far they have as you can see. Now it's about refining.

However this isn't about my messages, for now it's about replies. Please stick to the topic.

Thanks.

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"Liars sit in chairs, you know. Truth tellers just sort of hunker down" -RF

Go for new girls and use the template, 99% of everything they tell you to say are supposed to be for real life not online.
Editing post with replies, this will probably help me as much as it helps you

if you're profile is good enough, you can practically write anything in a message and get a reply...there's still time to loose it with a response though. Whatever way you handle them needs to be congruent with you and your profile.

here's my thoughts anyway. probably won't be as aggressive as other suggestions , i like to have a few messages to see if I'm going to get bored with them or not.

1. comment on "seems strange writing all this stuff about myself" in an agreeing way with a dhv caveat you've worked on yours etc. then ask her one of your qualifiers that you have on your profile.

2. humorously neg her for computer-neglect, say something about why you changed it, answer her question, ask one of your own.

3. say lol shame you didn't :p then, you like to have fun with your messages, . if she doesn't respond or better you'll be forced to walk away as its incongruent to stay in it.

4. say if by "interesting" you mean freakishly wierd, then yes! then ask her a qualifying question.

5. say just naturally guarded then, that's probably a good thing on here...so I hear! we won't get very far if you don't open up a little though... (you've already asked questions, you don't need to ask them again)

6. depends on how detailed her profile is, ideally it isn't then you can say
say "woh! lol, gotta know a little bit about you first! make sure you're not some crazy chick serial killer! tell me something about ....etc
if it's more detailed, change it to little more and tell me more about ... {something you have in common on her profile}

7. answer question with intriguing details, if her profile doesn't say ask her if she has a dog, or what type she has,

because you have qualifiers on your profile and we can be reasonably sure the whole lot rates highly, it's congruent for you to act selective over your responses.

1.

Her: Hi. Sorry my profile is so bare, it just seems strange writing all this stuff about myself. You can ask me anything you want to. We can talk here for a bit, Im not giving my phone number yet tho.

Response:
I've got a packed life, I just thought you seemed like the type of girl I could have fun with. How about a fun casual coffee date? We can talk there.
NO FREAKING SMILEYS FFS YOUR NOT IN GRADE 8.
2.

I've been at LA for , well this is online so I just thought I'd throw out a couple mutual interests we had. Anyways I'm having a couple days off work/school on . I'd like to get to know you better in real life, you can give me your number and I'll call you up.


3.

YOU FUCKED THIS ONE UP OUT OF CONTROL. YOUR NOT TRYING TO MARRY HER YOU WANT TO SEE HER CASUALLY AND LET THAT ESCALATE TO EITHER SEX OR A RELATIONSHIP.
Too late, you messed up.

4. This one reached out to me first via :

Her: Must have caught each others eye huh? 4 or 5 star rating isn't too bad in my book : ) So have you had any luck here meeting genuinely interesting people?
Hope to hear from you soon...

Response:
That depends, are you a genuinely interesting person?
her: yes (something along those lines)
Prove it to me, send me your digits and let's go out on a date.

5. POF response:
YOU NORMALLY WOULD HAVE FUCKED THIS ONE UP.

Although she does seem interested so I'm assuming she's desperate, a HB -10 or your extremely good looking (profile picture). Stop treating her like a god, and go on a date with her. NO COMPLIMENTS, maybe 1 or 2 MAX and make them observational compliments. Neg her if she's putting up a bitch shield, and be a fun humorous guy.

6.
There must be something wrong with you, what is it? A girl with your physique isn't in a shortage of suck up guys.
If your for real, send me your number and you can prove it to me

7. Reached out to me..
DON'T TOUCH THIS ONE WITH A TEN FOOT POLE, SHE HAS ISSUES TRUST ME.

Hi,
I thing messages are absolutely horrible.

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Gentleman, you are awesome, I got responses from all of them (yes, even the ones some of you said I couldn't recover from.. meh.. haters.), phone #'s so far from 3.

I've had one date already, 2 dates to be had this weekend, and more to come I'm sure.

As I gain more knowledge or have more questions, I'll post em. You guys rock. Thanks!

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"Liars sit in chairs, you know. Truth tellers just sort of hunker down" -RF