So since no one i know does PUA, i dont really get a critque on my game. Because of this ill switch from very different levels of cocky funny. It kinda ranges from passively flirty funny, to sarcastic funny, to asshole funny.
If you guys could critique this convo i think i might have a much better idea on how to settle my game.
Just to give you an idea of how this convo started this is what happend .I went with some friends at a club. One of the friends who met us there was this extremely sexy model. I danced with her for a while and i wont get into details, but later that night some guy was following her pretty badly so i sort of saved her from that. She remembered me and FB friended ,e. This was our convo over FB. I start out kinda not mean in any way just use a lot of funny and less cocky then get into more cocky. Is this the right way to do cocky funny. Any critique is appreciated.
Me- HOOOLLLLY! any stalker problems since last night :-p
HB-hahah well i got a text at 5 in the morning saying "hey we met at lima, i want to learn your name" needless to say, i did not respond lol thank you for saving me!!
Me- Wow I guess ur just a charmer. Haha no problem... no ones knows this but im actually superman so saving you from some kid in a club was an easy save. Normally im out stopping bank robbers and fighting crime, now thats hard work :-p
HB-haha superman i think you need to fly over here and save me because he won't stop texting me and i haven't even responded ever!
Me-damn... u picked a stage five clinger :-p no homo u should give me his number so i can mess with him

haha
HB-hahah yesss do it! he also texted me his full name so i could friend him on facebook if you want that too lol
Me- awww he was nice enough to do that for you how sweet seems like a keeper, buuuut ill stick to my anonymous texts. Some people might be dumb and go give there real info out to stalkers *cough* HOLLY *cough*

haha i dont repeat others mistakes though
that is all for now. What do you think?