So me being relatively new at gaming I thought I'd share my first good text convo that I'm somewhat proud of for critique. Kinda long but I didn't know the standard length for text convo posts.

All of this takes place after a HB7 comes over to pick something up at my place...

hb: sorry we interrupted you
me: now i'm going to fail my test for sure lol
hb: haha ya i'll take the blame lol
me: yess
hb: you seemed pissed
me: haha, thats how i look when i'm focused
hb: i dont like it
me: well come back and we'll have a do over
hb: i wouldnt want to distract you lol
me: it takes a lot to distract a sharp mind like mine
hb: i'm extremely distracting, everyone tells me
me: maybe everyone else is just easily distracted, wrap your mind around that
hb: possibly but maybe not
me: people probably find you distracting because you have a distracting personality, in a good way
hb: ok, gotcha well thank you
me: no problemo

time passes

hb: did you get that text from ***** the other night?
me: ya lol
hb: did you like it?
(text said "sexy can i?")
me: my cutoff for booty calls is 3 btw
hb: haha we stole her phone but ill be sure to keep that in mind
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me: didn't get the meaning of that text btw lol. but then again any text that says sexy in it must be good, reminded me of how I like my women...full of intrigue lol
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hb: ha, i know we sent "meow i'm a cat" to a lot of people
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me: (talk about an internet vid)
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hb: oh i have some funny vids i could show you
me: well maybe we can do some watching when i get done studying
hb: sounds good just let me know
me: might me later though
hb: thats fine

seemed to work.

Idk which girl this, but if you don't know her that well, maybe a little too direct in spots (keep em' guessing)

But it accomplished positive results, so no real critique.

Good work newbie.

Not too bad but I would try to keep it shorter. Roissy has a theory that you should imagine that all your texts will be shown on a jumbotron at a big sports arena. So the litmus test is would you be emberassed or not if it was shown to thousands of people. Keep that in mind when texting.

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~Carmo~