ok i am well aware that this text game was a flop (her lack of intrest)
but what i would like to know is where i went wrong
first of all she saw a post left by my friend on facebook, one of those what do you think "crazy1320" dreams about etc
needlesss to say
HB: I want to know what you dream about

x
me: me, you, lying on a beach watching the sunset, i turn my head over and gaze into your eyes. you gaze into mine, we lean towards each other, then i wake up

x x
HB:ahhh thats well sweet shame you woke up really x
me: and what do you dream about? make it sound better than mine

x x
HB: chicken lol im a fat girl inside

x
me: oh come on

did you see how much effort i put in that text, romance killer

x x
HB: hehe ahh [my name] getting romantic how sweet x
me: indeed, indeed, nothing wrong with it, just do it to the right person, you should try it

x x
HB: maybie i will one day

x
me: with who? x x
HB: woudnt you like to know

x
me: lol, shes playing hard to get now yeah

x x
HB: she doesnt play - she is hard to get x x
me:so how hard does a man have to work?

x x
HB: too hard that most give up

x
me: well i aint most guys x x
[she stops texting after this point ¬¬]
overall a very frustrating end
critique?