So I responded to this girls e-mail without running it through here first, now wishing I had. Here is my responce:

Yeah, x-company sucks. I'm really trying to find a cool job, like test pilot or international spy, but I'll take a job where I can get out of x-company. I'm writing my resume and am targeting just about anything that sounds fun. I think I have four versions of it written. You are right, that is close to me(she mentioned that she lives close to me in the last e-mail), and I know living in the ghetto sucks (did it in Michigan), but it was always entertaining. Going back to school is good. If you could do one thing for the rest of your life, what would it be?


So, I know the qualifier feels forced, but overall, what do you say about this e-mail resonse?