HB9 Model & Hb9 Gym Instructor - Contact details but no date

ok just wanted some opinions on this..

Was out at a club 2 weeks ago now, it was pretty wack in there so decided to leave and go somewhere else upon leaving the club we walked past 4 hot chics standing outside a bar. They were giving us all sorts of eye contact etc, so after initially walking past them i glanced over my shoulder to still see them all looking.

So i then took a few steps back and began talking to them. Done some basic pua stuff etc and then i found out all 4 of the gurls were gym instructors. Upon hearing this i tired to number close the hottest one.

She seemed quite flattered but stated that if i wanted to speak to her again i should phone her at her gym tomorow. So i left it there.

Walking 5 more minutes along the road to the next club, we bumps into another 2 hot chics, one of whom happens to be a model and quite high profile at least an HB9 maybe 10.

So after talking with her for 5minutes taking some photos etc, she asked me for my Facebook/MySpace details. So we exchanged details and i went on my way. Usually 9 times out of ten if i have number closed some chic i have already kissed her, but with both of these it was just an exchange of contact details.

Fast forward..

So next day i drops an email to the Gym of where this HB9 worked giving her my phone number. Not sure if i would ever hear from her again. But sure enough i gets a txt from her saying: "hi this is [gurls name] from [gym name] who is this?"

So i thot i shud signal my intentions straight away and show my interest to avoid slipping into the dreaded friend zone. So i asked her if she wanted to go for a drink next wk end, i txt:

"Hi yah, its [my name]. I was talking to you on saturday night in [area] We should go for a drink sometime, if not good luck with the fitness career x"

I then got a response saying "Omg u went to some effort to track me down! Musta made quite an impression on you:P Well that would be nice but not sure my boyf would be too keen on th idea lol.X"

I then txt back:
"Well i dont bump into hot fitness instructors every wkend plus i enjoy the chase, guess were going for a drink as friends then, when r u available? x"

And guess what i aint heard back from her since. Looking back now im kinda cringing at some of the stuff i txt her:

We should go for a drink sometime, if not good luck with the fitness career x"

the bit in red was the first mistake i feel as it displayed a lack of confidence.

"Well i dont bump into hot fitness instructors every wkend plus i enjoy the chase, guess were going for a drink as friends then, when r u available? x"

^That whole txt killed me as i come over as desperate and needy and very AFC in fact. Usually im alot smoother when txting but think i fell to pieces cos she was so hot.

Anyway do you agree with my analysis and do you think i have runied my chances beyond repair? I have txt her back once since this asking what she done at wkend and got no response, so shud i just let this one go???

I was reading the thread on txt msg lines and was thinking of maybe trying one of the cocky funny ones??

Also do you think i escalated things too fast which made her blurt out in the txt about her BF??

Mystery Method states:
"ASD is what makes a girl blurt out "I have a boyfriend" (Wether she actually does or not) - because you escalated faster than she was comfortable with."

Ok moving on to the model..
I sent her a msg on her online profile saying hey whats up general chit chat. She msg'd me back saying hi and asked "what are you cats up to at the weekend"

So again i think i made the mistake of escalating too fast. I said something like "hey bla bla, i see your a model what else do you have going for you apart from your good looks?, i dont really know much about you yet, we should go for a drink sometime"

^and to this i got no response.

I know the game is usually alot easier than this, but they were honestly two of the hottest gurls ive seen for ages which does increase the difficulty rating. Ive been trying to use Quality Control lately and really go for the hottest chics 9 and 10s.

So just thot id get that off my chest, and im open to any feedback on it.

"So again i think i made the mistake of escalating too fast". < Sums it up

I think you just need to work on building a bit more comfort before you try to take them out. Since they were both good looking women, they are probably asked out/complimented on a regular basis so to them you probably just seemed like every other guy. Try some more fluff talk, build rapport, make them laugh, show your higher value, anything besides asking them out right away. Like you said, it makes you come across as somewhat needy. Unfortunatetly it doesnt sound like you will get a second chance with either of these girls, but you can now learn from your mistakes and move on.

No sweat though, the fact that you approached and talked to two beautiful women will only help your game in the future.