Hola

This is how I usually game the girls in daygame:

Open: Broes: I saw you walking down the street and I though you were cute. I remember I was in London and all the girls there looked like elephants.
I usually throw in a time constraint too.

Transitioning: Broes: You're a visual person because you're eyes goes to the side.

I drop the attraction part because the girls from this point usually are attracted to me.

Qualification:
Broes: I was just in Stockholm and all the goodlooking girls there smoked. It doesn't matter if you're beautiful if you still smoke. Do you smoke?
HB: No
Broes: Good (rewarding her with that knuckle thing).

Here's how I usually get my problemens before the medium and large hoops I think I kinda rush. My goal is to get the conversation as naturally as possible.

Broes: You kinda seem like a smart girl, what's your favourite book?
I then talk about my favourite book (Harry Potter)

Broes: What's you best quality?

Whatever quality she mentions here, I ask her a little bit more about it. F.eks:
HB: I'm honest.
Broes: How are you honest?
HB: I don't lie.
Broes: I like that, I'm trying not to lie to my friends and my closest either.

What could I do better?

Anyone who knows?

Anyone who knows?

Does it work for you? I would say you go in too direct (but I favor the mystery method).
Actually not many girls in Stockholm smoke (just in case she happens to be from Stockholm).

Showing that you dont like fat girls is usually bad.

Why would Harry Potter be a DHV?

I just dont get your pick-up strategy but if it works for you, please use it...

Hey, I'm a fan of going direct during daygame. Period. Good for you for having balls.

However, your entire routine is centered around women.

"All the girls were elephants"
"The girls smoked"

etc.

If you ran this on me, yeah, I'm going to think you've assigned yourself quality as a person, which is attractive. You're interesting. You're entertaining. I'll give you my number, but here's what I'm going to think: This guy is going to get me in bed, judge me, and then talk about me to his friends. You sound like a guy who's wanting a one night stand. And who's going to kiss and tell. No way am I going to answer your phone call.

Rethink being so negative about OTHER women. Making fun of other girls weight is a huge red flag, and will put her on the defense (in a bad way, not in a... she's going to qualify way.)

I also think you have no deep rapport. Direct game is best served with deep rapport. You're getting to easy and light rapport with the favorite book and lying thing... but why not get into a DHV story chock full of some deep emotional capacity on your part. That's how you're going to ensure she's not going to flake.

Good stuff though.

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