This is one of my first sets that I felt I did well during but didn't develop as I wanted. I would like so pointers on where I could have improved.

So I was talking to a girl in the smoking area of a club who opened me and a friend. After negging her a couple of times and after she showed interest I isolated. Chatted playfully for another 5 minutes before a friend called her a shot distance away. She left the set and I turned to talk to my friend again and seconds later she re-opened me and we talked for another short time. While talking I used gamblers rapid escalation by getting close and breaking away and it was working. We then split as her friend wanted her so I did as Niel Straus and pointed to my cheek and said "kiss goodbye" and she complied. (BTW the conversation we had included her telling me about her ex, that relationships are bullshit and that I should get with every girl I can before a relationship).

Later in the night her and the same friend joined a group I was standing in and soon enough it was me and her again. This time she was very forward. As I was leaning against a wall she leaned on me with her rear in my crotch. I told her this shit ain't free and she owes me $30 but didnt push her off(mistake?). All this time I had my arms wrapped around her. She asked me to come down and dance, I said yes but stayed where I was until she walked away, she turned around saw I had my hand out so she came back and pulled me away. When we got to the dance floor, we danced for no more than 30seconds and she just fucking left and danced away so I did the same hoping she'd re-open but to no avail.

What I noticed myself when thinking about it was that I didn't mke her work for me as much the secound time. Is this the problem? Did I escalate too slowly?
Anyone any tips?

Dancing was her excuse for you to sexual escalate.... She kept coming back to reopen you twice in the row and you did nothing more than rubbing your crotch against her ass even after her speech about how you should get with every girl before relationship (actually you did not even do that, she leaned in herself). Why were you still playing all these bullshit PUA techniques/routines when the girl was already interested and wanted to fuck you? You missed all the green lights mate

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My thoughts are that when she's rubbing her butt on you, you need to lead her somewhere. You either need to pull or change locations. It would have prime time to make out with her on the dance floor too.

You didn't really give details about those 30 seconds though. That's a long time to dance.