So guy, I went into a book store, and met this beautiful girl, I asked if she knew where 50 shades of gray was, she laughed and we talked, I qualified, and number closed and she actually initiated text with me. Here's the Text convo please tell me how I did and if I made any mistakes. And if I did everything correct to get the meet up...
Text:
*I texted myself on her phone saying, "Hey sexy, text me"
She texts me a few hours later with: ";)"
Me: Hey, I found this great book
Her: That's good , what's it's about ? & I ended up not being able to buy any books
Me: Maybe next time. It's called, "How to hit on guys for dummies" you might like it xD
Her: Ahh, Lol Good choice (:
Me: Give it a read and you can show me what you learned next Saturday
Her: What if I already know better
Me: That's yet to be determined, where do you like to hangout in *My State* (she visits from another state)
Her: My moms house is in Blah town . Wbu ?
Me The art gallery in Blah town 2, it's fun, you'll love it!!
Her I never heard of it but if u think I will then ohkay

, btw what are u doing tomorrow ?
Me: My band has an audition for a record label tomorrow, we're rehearsing now - very excited!
Her: That's amazing

Me Thanks. So if your gonna' be my friend, I'd like to know more about you
Her: Ohkay (;, u can ask anything
Me: Hmm.. Tell me about your personality
Her: I don't know what to say about my personality , you'll figure me out by talking to over time (;
Me: So what made you want to be a Cop
Her: 02/02:the difference . & also to find that cop . And yeah,
Her: 01/02:A cop got away with *doing something bad to her family* , so I just want to be a cop to show people I'm not one of those who take thier power up the ass , that i want to be
Me: Woah.. I understand. I like that you want to make a difference. I'm trying to do the same.
Her: Yeah , . I try , and what made u wanna talk to me in the store ? (:
me: You'll have to find out on Saturday

how's 3:00? (trying to end the convo and bring it to a close)
Her: Sounds good (;, but now you'll left me wondering .
Me: You said you liked mysteries? (Did I DLV somehow?) I'll text you on Friday to confirm
Her: But I'm never good with waiting to find out about it. (Did she throw a test and me and give an IOD) And ohkay
Me: Good things come to those who wait

(trying to pass her test and DHV) We're gonna' hv a blast!! Gn HER NAME, mwuahhzz (trying to be like Skills360 lol)
Her: Goodnight (:
END:
Do you guys think I did anything to cut off the attraction and possibly get in the way of the meet up? How did I do here?
(it seems like things were good in the beginning but messed up later on, maybe not, maybe I'm being too hard on myself. What do you think?)