So about an hour ago I saw two women chatting with each other at the gym.

I walked up to them and asked " Hey, how are you guys. Can I get your opinion on something"

Then i went into a story about a friend being out of town and giving me $200 to get a present for his girlfriend... And I ask what do you think I should get her?

I kind of stumbled through this story though.. and I was leaning into them while telling them.. probably an invasion of personal space there... I'm pretty sure I was looking around a lot too.

One replied i should get them a necklace from tiffany's... And then i kind of froze lol.. not really sure of what to say next I just kind of lingered there and went into a barrage a questions, ultimately leading them to saying they had to go.

What could of I have done better in that situation?

Drop that dumbass scripted shit. I understand it gave you the confidence to approach but don't relie on that stuff. Why did you really approach them? You thought they were attractive right? What's wrong with saying that? NOTHING!!! So say it, and take it from there. The more you conversate with people the easier it is to have conversations. Check this link out ---> http://puarticles.blogspot.com/2008/01/ ... urden.html

You can't expect your first attempt to be spot-on. Sounds like you did fairly well. You'll need to burn through a lot more sets to get it down. That's why it's best to approach even unattractive sets. So you can burn them out without feeling bad. It really sucks burning out hot sets, so get more practice.

You could've had ANYTHING to say after the question. If you're quick with words talk about whatever they suggest; you need to be a quick thinker to adapt to each situation. If you think you'll be slow come up with something that works no matter what the girls say.

"i should get them a necklace from tiffany's" - respond; "Oh have you had your boyfriend buy you something there before?"
That's quick thinking, and you'd go on from there (obviously checking if they have a BF so you can handle that)

Or come up with something that works no matter what they say
(it doesn't matter what store they suggest here; target, tiffanies, google ect.) - "Well his girlfriend says she likes candy a lot; what candy are you?" and you can do the whole "M&M and snickers" routine or make up your own.

Either way never go up to a girl when you only know a opening, if you don't give the girls a reason to stay, they wouln't - simple as that.

For your first try it's fine, start somewhere and learn from then on

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