And Yes i Put caps on for ever word, Dont hate Haha, its a Habit People in my Highschool Develop. Anyways...
Yea so im Facebook messageing this girl, So far so good, I Said " Yea so your Pretty, But what else you got going for Ya ;]" and she Replys.

"haha well thank you. hmm i do well in school.going to be going to college for phycology. i love to hangout with friends. walk. laugh and party.im 100% real. i dont like fake bitches. or players.i have alot of turn offs and ons. i talk alot(lol) i go to alternative hs and im 17."

So i want to say something back, You know, something a PUA would say to Convey the right things. I have this Written in the message box but im not sure to press Reply or not. Some Edits or whatever would be great, so i can better understand how to write back in the future to other HB's.


"Lol... My Bad it didnt say You Wrote Back. But Im feelin that, I Like a Outgoin Smart Party girl, You must be Trouble ;P
And Yea me to, i hate it though."

Yes thats how we talk in Highschool, a little Ghetto, but its the Average talk to us at this age. But yea any help would be great thanks.! =]

Eklips-

1) Stop talking like that. Stupidity is never cool, I don't care if it's the norm.

2) What are you apologizing for? I'd take that out. I'd playfully tease her about the fact that she can't spell her future major correctly (psychology). Ask her what her turn ons and turn offs are since she seems to want to tell you.

She was pretty receptive to your initial message, so I think you have a legitimate chance with her.

Good luck

Thanks.! But its not stupid to everyone where i live, everyone talks like that, i live in a state/Area where most girls even the Classy ones talk like this, so it dosent effect my game, trust me ive seen way worse, the most Ghetto talk ever and he still got with the girl!

And what would i say to tease her, im a little new, so im not familiar with Negs, so its hard to make up my own without coming over the top as an asshole, how would i ask her this all in one message without seeming Needy to answer every bit of her message though? And i said "My Bad" [Aka..Sorry out where im from] because i wrote her back days later, maybe even a week i think.

But thanks for the Feedback, first time someone actually helped me out on here.! =]

EDIT: Also this is our First time talking, about 4-5 Messages down, it wouldnt be quick to ask her What her Turn On's/Off's are this Early on and ignore and bring it up later. Example " So you mentioned before you have some Turn on's and Off's, Since you told me that im assuming youd want me to know ;]" Something like that.?

Okay - very good. You actually contact back - good strong solid advice offered by surgical.

1 - It doesn't MATTER if everybody talks like that. It is ridiculous. Do you want to be
ridiculous or do you wish to stand out. Dare to be different. You are the man, if
you talk like kids, they will judge you like kids.
2 - Stop apologising for anything you do. There is NO, I repeat, NO reason to
apologise for speaking what you are thinking or what you want to say.
Goddamnit, learn it
If I would reshape your message I would do it something like this, keep in mind, this is MY kind of approach. It does not garantuee it fits your style or charachter!

"100% real, good that means no botox. You're good like this. I like it. That you talk a lot, I can tell, but still - are you like a rattlebox and gossip too? I don't like gossip - it's bitchy. I thought U didn't like bitches? :O ... yaikes.. maybe you're not my type - prove me wrong if you can tho!"

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Your right, im going to try and talk more like a mature guy rather then the rest, it would stand out to compared to how people talk where i live, and im going to stop Apolgizing aswell, but it did seem necessary only 'cause it was some time before i got back, but i see what you mean.

And yea thats good, i understand your game, and your right we all have diffrent style's, but keep in mind, im in the Highschool age, we dont really talk like that, she would probably laugh and be like "Wtf are you saying, rattlebox?" and i dont want to sound like an asshole, im not directing this towards you its just what she would probably say Hehe, shes a Hb9, she's Very confident and wont have a prob saying this. But i do like what you wrote it gave me a laugh, Playfull teaseing and makes her qualify herself, but she can also just not write back.

My goal was to aim towards a short message to come off as im a Busy guy and i dont have time for long messages, but Play with her a little.

But let me know! Im no pro im new, just giving my thoughts out there and to see how You guys would reply to them. Thanks.!

-Eklips

Bump... A little More advice would be great..

Lyrical gave you some realllly good advice man. And like he said, don't apologize for being yourself. Who gives a crap if it took you a week to respond, you have a life. If she's interested she won't care that it took you a week to respond.

Anyway, onto what I would say. I would tell her something along the lines of..."So, you like to talk a lot, that's cool...I guess. That means when we hang out I won't have to do all the talking . And I can already tell that you're trouble. I might have to rethink what I said about hanging out with you ."

But that's just me dude, I don't know how you're style is. Hopefully some of that can help you. If not, just remember to be yourself and it'll all be good!

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