Well for starters, i'm fairly new to this obviously, considering im in the Newbie questions section...And i just had a few things i'd like scrutinized.

One of my DHV stories is that I was recently awarded full college ride(Which is true, not a fake story i construed). But when i work this in to conversation or bring it up with relevant, sometimes i think it comes across as bragging? Not sure what to think, never been told i sounded like i was bragging, maybe its just me.

Secondly, My inner game has alot of holes...When i'm walking around seeing everyone, and see a set, or certain girl i want to open up on, i always think to myself "Why would she care what i have to say? She probably has guys 5x as good looking as i am linning up to be with her..." I don't know what to think, people have told me im very cute, should be a model for Ambercrombie and stupid shit like that, and i couldn't really tell if they were just trying to be funny or serious as it wasn't the type of infletion i'd take as humor, and have been told by tons of girls i have amazing hair eyes etc other things but never really took it far with them for differen't reasons... I've read into inner game, and i always seem fine prior to pre-opening, but once i'm out and about, it just seems to fall through... A little help would be amazing, Thanks.

Edit: Sorry for the lengthy updated and added some things.
~Jay

Hey man!

Write down your DHV story.
Have a PUA friend read it to you. (or record it and listen to yourself).

Not comming of as bragging ( a few things I use)
- Tell your story to the targets friends (make sure she hears it)
- If your story is "to amazing" or "too good to be true" (eventhough its completly true) ad a line or where you give yourself some critisism for something.
This will ad more cred to the character you wanne display.

Example: Your friend Chris was attacked by a whole motorcyklegang and you kicked their ass.

The context would be:
If someone starts a fight with my friend I'd never back down and leave him.
DHV: Loyalty, Alpha, Strong etc

Story:
I think there are times when you really have to standup and protect yourself and the once near to you.
(on the edge of bragging) ad something that makes you "normal"
Im not saying Im a mans man, I cry watching Chick-flicks and Im still pretty scared of my mom...
then go back to the story...
But when my buddy Chris here was attacked by a whole gang of...

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