I basicaly just said Im thinking of you and I hope your ok ect ect....and then said it was annoying and that since I hardly know her it pisses me off ect ect....

I have been seeing this girl for a couple weeks and I was actually thinks about her so I thought I would shoot the text....Now to me it seems kinda AFC but I thought I would give it a try because it negs her a bit yet still shows you care?

Rather then lie to women I have been trying to tell the truth but in a fun and cocky way....I mean I think you can show a girl you care but with out looking like a looser or stocker lol

Never send negative stuff like that through text, internet or phone, you're supposed to say it in a jokey way, she won't know you're joking/teasing via text

good call good call

haha she msg me back and didnt seem to mind the factI was think about her....so I guess it was a plus.

Your original text lowered your value, and when you followed it up with your second it lowered your value. I've been experimenting with a few corny jokes I found somewhere on this board like

Me: "What do you call a cow with no legs?"
HB: "uhhh i dono wut lolz?"
Me: "Ground beef!"
HB: "oh dats clever hahaha"

In a scenario like this, sure the joke was extremely corny and unexpected at a random part of the day but I figured it would get her gears turning to think about me. When I was going through my AFC stage (and even when I reverted back to AFC lingo just to see what would happen) I found that saying anything that can accidentally let them have value over you is deadly and will stop you dead in your track.

I would personally never use "You hijacked my brain." Ever again. Instead go for something more neggish, like.. "The smell of your perfume won't get the hell out of my car no matter how hard I try or what I use." This lets her leave her mark while you play with her a bit.

Edit: A girl shouldn't be minding that you are thinking about her, she should be enthused. Which also reinforces something else - You don't ever want her to know she's a main thought in your mind, always try to write something that will make it seems like you had a random thought that related to her. Kind of like when you approach a set, it's best not to do it directly but to use body language to initiate a sense of 'looking over your shoulder' type of thing.