Structuring a text, bit of advice



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SE23
PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2012 8:18 pm 
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Okay, i asked out a girl to join some friends for us to see a jazz gig. Im wondering how the best way to construct the text is, as i think little details like this i fall short of.
Say "hey how are you doing, that gig i was talking about is on monday, still up for coming ?"
Seems very bad for some reason, and is missing something, how can i structure this text better.
I say this because i know there is a certain art to it, and i would appreciate a couple of pointers
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 08, 2012 1:16 am 
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No need to blow such a simple concept out of proportion. ;)

Do you really think the way you structure a text will influence whether or not she accepts the invitation? If she is interested and not busy, she'll accept. Otherwise, she won't.
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