Style claimed something that helped him get so good was the fact he would log onto ASF and ask questions on how he could have done better after nearly every night out in the field. Since ASF is dead, i figured id ask here.

2 set, seated against store window, downtown strip, nighttime, one of the girls opened me saying nice to meet you with a hand shake as I walked by

-I shook her hand
-ran drug dealer opener, set didnt seem to hook, friend was barely even paying attention
-ran bestfriends test, set still didnt seem to enjoy it or hook and they didnt look at eachother, so I was like fuck what now what and said you sure your best friends and explained how the test worked
-they seemed bored so I kind of fluffed and ejected
-FAIL

So I figured I should have:

shook her hand and immediately negged, ewww sweaty palms
maybe cold read her friend and her, your the good one your the bad one
ran cs vs us or a similar routine directed to the bored friend
stacked from there

Any Help on if that would have been a better idea

To be honest bro it looks like you want your stuff to be scripted. Which I personally wouldn't recommend because it makes life way more complicated then it has to be.