So there is a girl that I like and I started talking to her on MSN, did I say the right things?, what could have I said better?, where to go on from here?, anything helps;) Please also comment my game because I am a beginner and would love some feedback on this..
I hope i translate Estonian to English well enough

The Text:

Me: I am luring girls to my house with candy, which do you prefer skittles or M&M's?
Her: Hahaa, M&M's.
Me: Very good, there weren't any Skittles at the store anyway.
You borrowed my hug if i remember correctly?
How have you been taking care of it?
Her: Very well.
Me: It needs a bedtime story to fall asleep.
I'll be hearing how you've treated it.
When will i get it back?
I don't actually know if i want it back.. how has it been behaveing?
Her: Quite well.
Me: I will be 2m tall soon.. how short are you?
Her: 171cm
Me: Congratulations btw..
Her: For what?
Me: I was just thinking about you..
Lets play a game..
If you lose, I wont come out with you .
Her: Nooo! How is it played?
Me: Black or White?
Her: Black
Me: Hot or Cold?
Her: Hot
Me:Sweet or Salty?
Me: Sweet
Me: Computer vs TV?
Her: Computers
Me: Hello colorblind, sexy, sugarlips nerd.
I'll give you another chance..
Her: Well..
Me: Sprite vs Fanta?
Her: Sprite
Me: Today vs Tomorrow?
Her: Today
Me: I pick the place or u pick the place?
Her: You pick the place.
Me : Today isn't going to work for me.. ( it was 10pm atleast )
Tomorrow neither..
The day after..
Her: Haha
Me: A place found spontaneously, chatting and Sprite.
Her: haha, Okey.
Me: Out of all the (nickname)'s i think you're my favorite.
How is my favorite little brat doing anyway?
Her: Thank you, do yo ueven know any other (nickname)s?
Me: For me to know and you to find out.
Do you know anyone who you're having fun talking to and who makes you smile and you aren't afraid to talk about anything with him?
Her: Yea, that person is you.
Me: Ok, i dont know anyone like that..
Her: Ok
Me: Ok ok.. i was just trying to be funny and cute. Guess i was just cute..
Her: Noo, you were both. (Bot was spelled in an accent of Saaremaa )
Me: So your mom/dad is from Saaremaa?
Her: No, my boyfriend was.
Me: What about your boyfriend?
Her: He was from Saaremaa.
Me: Kinda wierd..
Her: What is?
Me: He isn't anymore?
Her: Yes he is..
Me: Still your boyfriend?
Her: No..what of it?
Me: If anyone asks me that, then i'll know what to say.
Her: Ok
(Some time passes)
Me: Statistics:
Studies have shown that 93% of all women masturbate during showering
The other 7% sings.
Do you know what they are singing about?
Her: Well..?
Me: You Don't know?!
Are you part of the 93%?
(A minute passes)
Just having a little fun, calm down.
Her: I am calm...
Me: Don't think of me all the time!
Her: I have to.
Me: Oops.
Her: What?
Me: Ahem.. never mind..
A friend of mine said that girls can't be funny..is that true?
Her: It's a lie!
Me: Prove it!
Her: I cant
Me: Thought so..
( Some time passes by)
Is it just me or are you mad at me?
Her: No I'm not, you're imagining things.
Me: How's with the balls?
Her: Balls? U drunk or something?
Me: Why do you always think I'm drunk?
Her: You're talking wierd ( I had never talked to her the PUA way before..)
Me: How dont you remember the balls?
1-10
About my appearance, personality and attractiveness.
Shoot.
Her: 8,5
Me: About what? Separately honey..
Her: Personality 11. Appearance 9,5, Attractiveness 8,5.(When I last asked her that she said about 7,5 to all of them, it's wierd how just talking makes my appearance better, because I haven't seen her since summer..)
Me: 11?! What SO great about my personality then?
Her: You're just so cool!
Me: Appearance 9,5?
(Nickname)
U haven't even seen my new scarf yet..
Her: I would love to! But now answer about me please.
Me: (Nickname)
Saturday
I'll whisper it in your ear (gonna try and make some kino learned from the Gambler:D)
But only if you behave and won't embarrass me..
Her: Go fuck yourself ( A very funny expression, dunno the right translation..)
Seriously, tell me..
Something took you breathless?
Me: Hey, you're not that good looking..
Her: Thank you.
Me: I'd say.. this Saturday 5:37pm?
Her: (The funny expression again, sorta like go fuck yourself but in a *seriously, tell me* kinda way)
I wont come out with you!
Me: Suit yourself, u'll never know then..
Her: Tell me!
Me: I repeat. This saturday 5:37pm, take it or leave it.
Her: Take
Me: Then we have a deal.
Her: Tell meeee!!
Me: Stay pretty!
Bye

You're trying WAY too hard. You don't need to have routine after routine, though they work ok for you here.

For every conversation like this you have, you need to approach 5 girls, or you're not going to improve. You have to do it, deal?

The part you did right was inviting her out on saturday. But why didn't you give a place?? And why did you end the conversation right after?

Set up a place as soon as you can. Don't have this long of a conversation, just make sure she knows you're serious about this date. Right now she thinks it was a joke.
Another point where you went wrong. "No...what of it?" "I don't hit on girls with boyfriends." then change the subject right away. You are never going to get her if she doesn't know you like her. Make it really obvious.

Still, you did alright. MSN doesn't mean anything compared to real life though.

Deal:) I am going to meet her today, and i didn't set the place because the town she lives in is more of a country place, deserted city, there is not much to do or many cafes to invite her to.

Thanks for the response, these kind of responses are what I'm looking for.
Gonna do some serious game with her , wish me luck for the *battle* today:P

yea, you were trying WAY too hard....you were using too much canned material, and failed to have a conversation, or build attraction. However, you had her at some points in which ill give you credit for. But advice, just try not too use so much canned material guy.

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Hey look at that!
What?
That! You dont see it?
No not really....
Oh come on theres nothing i just wanted to talk to you. Whats your name?

I will add to what's been said already:

Game other women. It's tough to not want to try hard, it is for me at least. But it will become much easier if you are talking to 3-4 girls as opposed to just that one chick.

Furthermore, don't do this to yourself. If you try to analyze conversations word by word and sentence by sentence, you won't improve. You will just go nuts.

So you got the date?

Good job, now figure out what u're going to do with it...