I don't like your opener. Hot girls know they are hot.
Two weeks ago I was on a phone with a girl I met in the club and she said how she hated when I called her cute the night we met. She said she wants to throw up every time she hears that. Then I told her You are as ugly as dick (there is expression like that in my language) and she replied That's better.
Two nights ago I had so much fun and almost fucked

a smoking hot girl I opened with You look like a nasty bitch and I fucking love it, said with the big smile.
You can't go wrong with classic opinion openers.