I am new to this PUA forum but get this.

I was in the club on our reservation, and these 2 girls come to our reservation, and the one is starting to dance with me ( shes an 8/10), but the way she acts she thinks shes a 10. She starts to dance with me and she smiles at me as well. I am good looking guy with a nice style, but I am not really good with women,

I thought OKAY lets try a neg from MM method " So, what else do you have going except your looks? " and shes like " what else do you have going on except that you are rich? " (with an angry tone). I am like " I am not rich sweetheart".
(what should i say here?)

Then she tells her boyfriend,
BF: "what did u say to my gf, step down" ( hes really mad)
me: " oh i didnt know shes your girl man
BF: Apologise now! to me and my gf! (WHAT THE FUCK?)
ME: Listen man I told you I did not know he was ur girl and I really did not say anything to her so I am not going to apologise, but i apologise to you if it makes u feel better.
BF: COME OUTSIDE! ( He really wanted to fight, tried to calm him down me and my friends, he grabbed my collar shit he wanted to kill me)
Went outside, i broke his nose then left the club.

I then apologised to his gf and her friend for beating him up, I did not want to this, BUT i am not gonna stand there and let him beat me to death right?

MY QUESTIONS ARE:
WHAT DID I DO WRONG?
HOW THE SITUATION COULD BE HANDLED BETTER?
WAS THE NEG TOO HARSH?
HOW COULD I HAVE IMPROVED MY ANSWER TO HER NEG?

THANK YOU. I WILL REALLY APPRECIATE ANY REPLIES.

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seemed like it had a good outcome but you shouldn't have apologized to his girlfriend after the fight, you should have tried to get her to come home with you.

No bro you did good. You tried to clamn the jackass down, its his fault his nose is broke. I would had done the same thing. I always try to chill it down first, but if that doesnt work then its fight night. Thumbs up from me. Only better if you had gotten the girl lol.
But i guarantee your on the girls mind. And if she does come back in there...she will be all yours. She is a one nighter though, some girls get off on the whole watching a guy fight for them. So she prob would had been a waste of time anyway and full of drama (unless she was a hit it and quit it ha).

I'm not sure about the first three, it would have been good to be there and witness the whole thing to tell.

but this question
HOW COULD I HAVE IMPROVED MY ANSWER TO HER NEG?
instead of "I am not rich sweetheart" Something along the lines of
"Oh, so you're witty, i generally value/don't value this characteristic, (depending on if you like it about her or not). However you do make some very inaccurate assumptions, i'm not at all rich, just clever."

Don't try and memorize anything to say, but just get the feel of what you should be trying to come across as.

Nice! I know the my reply was a bit off, just didn't think on the spot. I have to remember i am trying to win the girl.. just got carried away. I ll try this again tonight see what I can improve on.

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