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Please, please do yourself a huge favor and take some time to read what's on that website.
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I read your post three times and I have no idea what the fuck you wrote.
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I was out last night and ran into a girl i got to know recently really cool girl i have a slight oneitis over her but its manageable,she was already talking to another guy when i ran into her, she stopped talking to him straight away when she seen me and introduced me to her friend talked to her then i said we should grab some seats her and her friend followed me and we sat her friend went to the bar to get a drink so it was just us we had a bit of a laugh for a few minutes and i did alot of kino which she was replicating then another of her friends came along and we had to talk to her after a while they said they were heading to another bar and she asked if i was coming i said yes and we left,down at the other bar i left her with her friends for a while, her and friends then came out to the smoking area where me a two other lads were i done a kind of a cool handshake thing on one of the girls a she held out her hand so i could do it to her, next I isolated her from her friends by going to a punchball machine a we had a go at I joked around about her being so strong a she showed me her muscles and she told me about some guy at college that was asking her if she goes to the gym because she looks so well, I really stated to turn it up now i was asking about her course she does nursing and I asked her did she get her uniform yet she said she did and its not as sexy as she thought she said its about this long showing me her legs i told her it should be way shorter and rubbed her leg she started to touch me on the leg and just as i thought it was getting sexual her friends come over and pull her away all of the action from the isolation happened in about two minutes that was the last of the serious stuff we held hands briefly as we walked to the club in a group and she went ahead with one of her friends, about two hours later on I told her to come for a dance in the club and she said her friends were coming up when her friends came she left immedietly, I seen her a few other times that night but didn't bother talking to her is there anything i done wrong or something that i didn't do.
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Not sure how old you are but those who continued to pass you beyond 3rd grade should be removed from the teaching profession. Judging by your writing performance, I can tell you with confidence that you will have serious problems verbally convincing others of ANYTHING, other than the fact that you may or may not be a 4th grade drop out. This is bad.