I literally started reading Savoy's Magic Bullet yesterday, I ve read a good part but not everything. I'm going to a music festival today so I thought it would be a great place to try a "routine." Any suggestions/critique/comments would be great.

Outline(bare bones)

open
me:What band are you looking most forward to? or If you were one of the bands playing,which one would you be?
hbs: blablalbakl

transition
me: best friend routine(very stock I know) comment on their choices, tease if I dont agree, high five if i like their answer.
then i say, "that is what i love about concerts, you meet people who are very close.

attraction
go into dhv story about meeting some girls at a concert and now whenever im in their city we hang out.
(I think I need more here)

isolation(during interlude, where bands are setting up)
hey, its hot in here. do you want to get some fresh air?

proceed to qualify her
me:besides being a groupie, what else do you do?
her: alhdlfkadfas

comfort:
gets some food, talk about whatever.(I can build comfort naturally, I have come to realize)

seduction- not sure if it applies, because im going with friends and we need to drive back home. from what i read, seduction is if you have the opportunity for more than kissing.

I am anticipating that it will go as planned until attraction. After that I doubt it will go as planned, but I think I can wing it comfortably from there.

Feedback please.

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thats not bad, wanna hear how it turns out! I love going to gigs cause i literally always accuse girls of feeling me up or rape. i've told a story about a gig where i said i went to see some band all girls love, and how terrible it was being surrounded and crushed by girls on all sides getting all sweaty and . . . you get the drill. its not amazing but i've got a few laughs, and it gives the impression that you're easy around women especially in uncomfortable circumstances. just an idea

yeah man, I love going to concerts. me and my friends always create a party around us.
the concert was great, i used the "which band are you" opener got some great responses. threw some negs at their choices in music. i also got my story about how keep in contact with the girls i met at a previous concert. they were diggin it, and we danced, all was good.

but then.....in the middle of the show these two creeps start shooting up heroin!!! and i absolutely cant stand needles so I immediately starting feeling lightheaded and had to leave the crowd. once I got some fresh air, I returned in the crowd but didnt reunite with the girls we were hanging with.

all in all still a great time.

I really like your story, mind if I borrow it?

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