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Hey, so im trying to create a dhv story after opening
Why?
I understand that you are new to the forum and you probably recently read the game or some other mystery related book. But let me save you some trouble. First of all, all the mystery material has been around and very available for the past ten years. You are lucky to find a girl these days that hasn't already heard those routines. Secondly, by feeling the need to demonstrate value to the girl you are immediately assuming that she is somehow better than you, why else would you suck up to her?
If you feel that you don't have much to say on your own and you want a kick start by using other peoples material I suggest you look through some other books that are a little more versatile and original.
I have also written down a lot of my own material in my thread "10 things..." linked below.
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Slywalker
10 things I wish someone taught me about Pick Up
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