Hi

This is a story i used online earlier today which got a good response and got her more intrested in me.
The story is half made up

Quick Backdrop:
Its been raining like mad where live for the past few days..also its a different language but it should still work in English.

ME: So what are you up to on this cold and rainy eve?
HB: Its not raining here right now..is it raining with you?
ME: not anymore BUT..Something wild happend to me today, i got out of a meeting and I got stuck in an electricity failure inside an elevator at floor 31 in an office building.
It was all dark and cold and quiet, There were 3 girls stuck with me and 1 older lady who started complaining she wasn`t feeling too good.
I had to calm everyone down saying that everything was going to be ok and just being funny
Then i played some Mozart on my iphone which everyone found really funny and the whole situation because very surrealist...

Suggestions? feedback?

lol, neat, you can add a little bit more detail bout the girl, that she is a model etc,

i go like this:
me: wow, im so lucky today, well i thoguht that i had a bad day but not really, first i got trap in a elevator for 30min.
hb:blah,blah
me:lol, but guess what ?
hb:what?
me: these two girl i met, they are model, but too bad they live in Europe, and i got a kiss from them.
btw this is not DHV, is DHV SPIKE

I see your point but i am concerned it may come off as bragging or
An unlikely story if i throw models in there...
Btw i used it again today but with a twist
This time i had a guitar with me in the elevator
And i throw a lil jam session/concert in pitch black..
Do you have any idea how hard it is to change chords in pitch black?