I quite like this. The main reason being if you dont get to kiss her and it takes the worst turn then you can just reply to the "you goin to kiss me" comment with "well if thats what you're thinking about, yes." maybe even add on the end "i might be able to read minds but i cant predict the future. What do you reckon is the first thing you'd say after i kissed you [
her reply] lets find out".
If you dont get a kiss from the first k-close, you can simply add another on the end.
Good stuff man, keep it up
GrifterUK