Okay,while i was in a club at the valentine's day i came up with this
opener,it worked for me great in a 2-set so i wanted to tell you all about it,
and maybe help to make it look better,so here it goes:

You open the set, by saying this to the target:
-Hi,my friend over there(point a random girl HB8+ in the club)
said she likes you,but she's seems too shy to come up and talk to you,
what do you want me to tell her?
-Where is your friend??
-Over there, you see that girl with the blonde hair?(i pointed an HB9 that
was in a 3 set)that's her, and she said to me that she finds you attractive
-oh my god, are you serious?
-I am, i'm going to her in a bit, but before that, let me ask you something,
are these nails real?
....and i continued from here negging,dhving and finally got her friend's number,i didn't actually get gers but that didn't mind me

Tell me what you think about it and let's find some ways to improve it
i think it is great, because it conveys many things such as
-preselection(you have an HB friend)
-decisive and not shy around women(because you actually went to her
in order to tell her about it,because the HB friend was shy
-jealousy,when you actually say i'm going to get back to her,
i thought i felt her loosing something, because she started finding me attractive and i already wanted to leave, which never happened until
the phone number;)

She probably was freaking out that a hot gay girl was eye'ing her the whole night. I would like to see a real lesbian or bi-sexual say lets go and talk to her.

I like what you did, it was fun like you could walk around all day in the club smiling knowing that you freaked out some girls into thinking some lesbian girl is after them, or will hit on them at some point or time. That alone would put me into a great mood, laughing to myself.

I have no opinion on anything else. I mainly go naturally, and really can't remember much of the mm structure. You did good.

I think this is pretty good except that if the delivery is wrong, it would seem to make you look like a sucker for being some HB's message boy. I might give it a try sometime.

old post, but i like this.
i agree with strange_loops though. you sound like a messenger boy and thats weak. instead, you should make it seem like your going AGAINST your HB friends will, or without her knowing. say 'hey, so i can only stay for a second, but my friend over there? she is totally into you, and she is way shy. she doesnt usually get out much, but...' blah blah blah. make it seem like your trying to help your friend out without her realizing it.

I dislike scripts but I agree with Ulysses' suggestions. You don't want to look like some hot girl's bitch. Say something about your friend (HB9) not having the balls to ask you out like a man. Which is ironic and funny, especially if you deliver it with a straight face.

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