Standing in a pizza line and saw that the HB5 behind me was giving me the curious, but reserved look. The pizza place was attached to a club and I had just gotten out of there. It was like 1 in the morning.

GOAL - F-Close
Me: Do I look gay?
Target: (Giggling) No. why?
Me: Bc two dudes hit on me tonight. I'm rattled?
Target: You should take it as a compliment.
Me: (My Options - 'I can ask her a question' OR 'Give her the beauty is common neg' OR 'Buggy bunnies over bite neg')

I went with a question and she lost interest because it seemed too early to neg her.

QUESTION:
Was it too early to neg her?
What should have I done?

I'm not answering as a guru, but I think you came off too gamey. What I mean is that your opening was the beginning of an act and you had nowhere to go after that. The best conversations start normally. You could have asked her how she was doing, said something about the club if you were both in there and introduced yourself. That's how you start a mutual bond that you can work with. After that you could have done your little routine and had some success out of it because you would have established a foundation with her instead of the guy who walked up and tried a line on her. Then get her to talk about herself so she feels like you are interested in who she is.

Take the thought of negs out of your process. You don't need it.

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It's a line/routine - I actually think it's not a bad one, as far as they go... But get away from them and gamey devices as soon as you can within the interaction.

You transitioned to from a routine to another routine (a neg or a gamey question or whatever) - And you didn't get as far as 'what to do after THAT' but I'm willing to bet it may have been The Cube, or a neg, or another line/routine...

What'd you do wrong? That.

Be more natural. Smile and KINO.

Shake her hand... don't let her hand go and keep talking to her, for example.

Sounds like Avenue and Artichoke Pizza -NYC. No?

You should have asked her if she has ever had the Sausage Slice, and you serve it well.

its always too early to neg- dont do it. reward her for answering you, dont punish

you should have qualified her on what she was up to and who she was with, figured out logistics from there. it could have been possible to pull her from the pizza place to go back to your place.

i have some stories of me picking up girls that were walking out of the nighclub or were already out of the nighclubs. its often better than the club itself!

always handle your logistics because they can mess you up the most

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What's with so much gaming man?

Why don't you just relax and enjoy the conversation with her?

Example:

GOAL - ENJOY THE FUC*** CONVERSATION AND SEE WHERE THINGS COULD GO

You: Do I look gay?
Target: (Giggling) No. why?
You: Bc two dudes hit on me tonight. I'm rattled?
Target: You should take it as a compliment.
You: I'm not sure...don't really feel comfortable being objectified like that...I have feelings too
You: Do you like when random guys just start hitting on you?
Target: Depending on the guy
You: O you're so evil...so if a guy isn't as handsome as me, you're just going to blow him of?
Target: Haha, noo...what I'm saying is it depends if I find the guy cute or interesting...
You: Well you are good... I mean, you got me talking with you in the middle of this line... such a player
Target: Me a player haha, you started talking to me...
You: O you wish (CHANGING THE SUBJECT NOW) SO what else do you do besides picking up guys
in lines...
Target: Well I go to school and work...
You: O really? Busy girl. What do you study?

And you keep going up to a point where you say, "Hey you seem like a cool person, we should
hang out sometimes...here, put your number in my phone..."

Or whatever your goal would be at this point.

I don't know how old are you, but ditch the goals of f* closing the girl and behave like a normal person.

Focus on having fun in the conversation, and that will give you much more success
than if you just try to game them.

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^^^^^proof this guy talks to himself

where do you get your advice from? cause highly unlikely the conversation would end up like that

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