Hey guys.. I have a story that works for me.. but I need some help tweeking it before I run it in the field. This is something that has happened to me recently.. but I'm not sure if I should say that, or "my friend".. but i'll use the friend for now...

-- Hey guys.. I wanted to get a female opinion on something real quick.. 'my friend' was seeing this girl, but recently she got pissed at him for cheating.. but it's slightly more complicated... the girl has been living with another guy, her so-called boyfriend for about a year.. my friend and her have been having an affair for almost as long.. well my friend decided that if she was getting double the pleasure, than there's no reason for him to be monogamous.. well.. it turns out he had a guilty conscience and told her about another girl he slept with.. she got pissed off and completely flipped the script.. i think she's a bit hypocritical to expect him to see only her, when she's going back to sleep with her boyfriend after every time they hook up? what do you think?


ok.. so should i stick with saying it's my friend? or should i be honest and say it's me..? i think saying it's me, might help out on the aspect of showing 1. preselction, and 2. DHV. On the other hand.. i think it's strage to walk up to a couple random girls and get their opinion on my love life.. but not necessarily (for some reason) as strange if i'm asking about my friend...

also.. any tweeks i can't add to this would be greatly appreciated!

ok.. apparently,... it's too long. so maybe I need to shorten it.. or find a segway into that.. I think it will work for me, since it happened to me.. I find the openers/stories that aren't my own personal ones, difficult to tell. It's much easier for me to speak from the heart than from a script.. it just sounds more sincere...

Wow, thats a mouthfull, I stopped reading after the word opinion. Branch out.

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What a title!

I agree
it's way to long to use as an opener, u should say it in parts.

Do you know the jealous girlfriend opener? Try and compare it to your situation, that will help you a lot.

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ice_melter

Too long.. got it...

let me rethink it and find a way to make into sections...

The jealous girlfriend opener is not short.. but i see what you mean.. thanks ice.