Thinking about using this one, but I wanted to get some feedback from the forum first.

Me: Hey, can I get a woman's view on something?
Her: Sure
Me: My friend, <insert name> has been in a relationship for two years now, and he and his girlfriend were constantly going at it...didn't matter if they were in public or not, if they wanted to fuck, they just went at it. Well, about three months ago, he "found religion" and decided that he couldn't have sex anymore until they got married. It's been driving her crazy! What do you think?


How can I improve on this? Or should I scrap it all together?

I like it and I know girls are going to hook on this but we need to make it shorter.

Maybe if you re-write it like this, "I need a woman's view on something real quick?" My friend, is in long relationship, and they were always fucking! Didn't matter where or when! Anyways, he later found religion, and wants to wait til marriage, she's going nuts? What should he do?

Don't use a persons name, and secondly ask them something specific like what should he do or what should she do? Not what do you think, It's too open ended. GOOD LUCK! I like it.

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I hear ya, I like that...keep it short, let them answer and play from there. Thanks for the feedback

Yeah its good, I don't know about using fuck and fucking every where it might give them the impression that your crude and its bringing up sex way too early in the phase imo. But its definitely kudos for trying to be original!!!

Also, you probably already thinking it but just in case, false time constraint. Remember the last time some new person came over and joined your group while you were out and about or just chiling or even aproached by a weirdo? Chances are if the aproachee was male, you and your friends were all thinking, a) what the fuck is this guy doing approaching (remember its hard wired to get defensive about new things, because they could be dangerous or a threat to our security) and b) when the fuck is he leaving.

An opinion opener is so successful because it has the potential to tackle both these problem head on, when used correctly.

Most importantly field test it and tell us how successful it was!!!!


Mildawg

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I like it seems like you have it calibrated so try using it in various ways to see which works the best.

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