I'm on here to meet a girl that is outgoing, has a sense of humor that not the average girl would have, has fun wherever she goes, and has a personality that makes people question themselves at times..Not too crazy but right in the middle of normal and crazy. So if you can't have fun with me let alone going to the grocery store your in for it. I try to make the best out of everything so if something sucks I'll make it an adventure or find someone to talk to.. Lastly I don't want a girl that is insecure and still hasn't accepted who she truly is. I'm on here to meet cool girls that have these qualities, If you don't then find someone else .

(What about now, I fixed it up a little)

Don't let the word "hate" be one of the first words she reads from you.

change to:

"First of all, if you're a gold-digger, please don't message me."

I don't understand why you have to be hostile at all. The first thing I thought when I read your first few sentences is "whoa this guy needs to calm down." I'd bet money that's what other girls will think too.

I think it can be assumed that most people don't want gold diggers. That's like typing "I drink water sometimes." We all drink water sometimes. Why the hell would I say that to someone I'm just meeting?

Also, that last comment isn't necessary. You can cutoff that sentence at qualities. The rest of it is implied but by typing it you sound like a dick for no reason. Winky face does not make it read better.

I would also change it to cool girls instead of one cool girl. If you meet one cool girl you like, you are free to stick with her. You don't have to announce to the world that you are sticking with the first thing that comes across and matches these qualities. You are here to meet girls which is multiple and I highly doubt you will be marrying the girl that meets your very short list of qualities.

I'm a guy and I feel like I'm being fucking attacked every time I lay my eyes on your post. Imagine how a girl, who is usually more sensitive to these things (even the ones who don't seem to care) will react to it.

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