This is a HB 9.6 CLOSE 10. I'm wondering what i could improve on or work on, this convo was 20 min long. Be harsh the harsher the better. Thanks in advance




BeachShark: Hey, I was browsing and you caught my eye..you seem interesting :)After reading your profile, you seem like a polite, cool and a very attractive person!
How about we go out on a friendly date?
BeachShark: is that true on your profile?
goldylock: what part?
BeachShark: about being multi dimensional
BeachShark: how so?
goldylocks: I have manysides to me
BeachShark: lets see ima take a shot at describing you
goldylocks: go ahead shoot
BeachShark: i get a point for each correct answer
BeachShark: Outgoing, maybe a good dancer
BeachShark: music is a passion
BeachShark: you love animal
BeachShark: can get dirty if needed
BeachShark: loves the beach
goldylocks: 5 for 5 lol
BeachShark: i would say good cook
BeachShark: but i think you are more of a baker
goldylocks: maybe
BeachShark: always smiling
BeachShark: And you make elderly people smile
BeachShark: how many points?
goldylocks: 5000
goldylocks: u want ur prize now?
BeachShark: hmmm
BeachShark: surprise me
BeachShark: well whats my prize
goldylocks: im still thinking..what do u want?

BeachShark: do you have text on your phone?
BeachShark: i have a meeting soon
goldylocks: yeah
goldylocks1234: do u want my #
BeachShark: yea ill send you a text when i get a chance
goldylocks: 000-000-00
BeachShark: you seem like a cool girl
goldylocks: i am:
goldylocks: )
BeachShark: im Ricardo btw
goldylocks: Im Elizabeth
BeachShark: really?
goldylocks: yea
BeachShark: well talk to you soon
goldylocks1234: ok