Hi! I represent one of the most famous Russian pick-up artist Alex Lesley and his book "Life without Pants". Here you can enjoy 6 examples of translation of the passage of this book . Please rate translations from the best to the worst and tell which translation you think will be better for publishing. Aware that Translation 6 is another passage than other five. I will appreciate all comments.

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Translation 1
I slapped her in the face and turned her ass out. After that, I started to rip her clothes away and tear them to shreds.
She kept provoking me by saying - you are so sissy baby, you are just total pussy!
I turned her again, one more slap! I have taken a great deal of different martial arts classes to be able not only to slap that hard but also to feel the hit and keep it under control. I took her by the throat, forcefully bent her down to the knees and took my cock out of fly.
- Suck it out, slut!
And then I tucked my cock into her mouth! She knuckled under and went with it. I really felt nice about it. She started to suck the cock and already was blubbering just a bit. It is always very important how the woman is treated in this very moment. The feel is important as not each of us can go on like that and this is so rare according to my experience… Not only from my end but also from hers.
She really started to cry. And to believe me.
I roughly raised her up by the hair and threw her to a hood. Rudely got inside of her and started to shag her hard.
Thunder already was about to start and wind was rising stronger with every minute!
- I am scared.
- Zip it, scum! - I stuck my fingers in her mouth and went on with fucking her hard.
I threw her to the field. Rain already started. She was totally naked and I was fully dressed up. The field was wild but grass was very high and sharp! Her delicate and soft body hit a sharp grass and mixed up with the dirt!
- Baby - she screamed - it's dirty up here! Аaah!

EXPERT'S RULE: The sex is bad if woman cares what's going on around her! Fuck her so hard that she would forget where she is, make her so excited that she couldn't feel any pain!
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Translation 2
I slapped her across the face, turned her ass around and started stripping her clothes off almost tearing it.
She was like – baby, you are so tender, my tenderfoot! – she said provoking me!
I turned her around and one more slap! To hit like this and control the beat I was doing different martial arts, perhaps that’s why I feel power so good. I took her by her neck, let her down on her knees, and took my dick out of a fly:
- Suck, you bitch!
I stopped her mouth with dick! She complied and it pleased me. She started sucking weeping a bit. The attitude to a woman at this moment is very important. But the most important is to “feel a woman” and as my experience shows not everyone can act like that – it is a huge rarity…
From my side as well as from hers.
She really started crying and trusting me.
I picked her up by the hair and threw her roughly on a hood. I harshly entered and began to fuck her hard.
A thunder began and a wind has risen.
- I’m scared.
- Shut up, nit! – I stuck fingers inside her mouth and continued fucking her.
I threw her on a field. The rain has already begun. She was completely naked but I was dressed. The field was wild but the grass was tall and sharp! Her tender and soft body turned out to be mashed with dirt and mud!
- Baby – she screamed – it is dirty here!

MASTER’S CODEX – if the place for a woman is important then it is a bad sex! Fuck her so hard that she forgets where she is and doesn't feel pain from excitement!
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Translation 3
I slapped her in the face, then I turned her ass towards me and began stripping her, tearing her clothes off.
She goes like: still you are so gentle, babe, you are such a pussy! – She was definitely provoking me!
I turned her around and then I smacked her one more time! I did a lot of different martial arts to get this strong punch and to be able to control it, so now I know how to control my power rather well. I grabbed her by the throat and put her on her knees in front of me. I unzipped my pants and pulled out my dick.
- Suck my dick, you bitch!
Then I roughly stuck my cock up her mouth! She obeyed me and it felt very good. She started sucking my cock, and right away I heard her moaning a little bit. The way you treat a woman at this point is very important. And it is important to feel all that, not everyone can play this game. I would say, judging from my own experience, a good player in this regard, both whether it is a guy or a girl, is a very rare thing.
She really started crying. And she started believing me.
I picked her up by the hair and roughly sat her on the hood of a car. I harshly put my dick into her pussy and started fucking her brains out.
The wind started picking up, and the storm had begun!
- I'm scared
- Shut the fuck up, whore! – And I stuck my fingers up her mouth and continued fucking her brains out.
I threw her onto the field. It was already raining. She was completely naked, whereas I had some clothes on. The field was wild but the grass was tall and sharp! Her soft and tender body was covered in sharp grass and mud!
- Baby – she screamed – don’t you think it’s a little dirty in here! Huh!

PRO’s RULE: If the environment is important to a woman during sex then it is bad sex! You should fuck her so hard that she forgot where she was and did not feel any pain from the excitement
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Translation 4
I slapped her face, then turned her around with her ass to me and started ripping her clothes off, tearing them apart.
But she kept on going like ‘you’re so gentle, honey, you’re little wussy!’ – she was setting me on!
I turned her around, another slap! I've been studying various martial arts to learn how to control my strike, so I can feel the force pretty well. I grabbed her throat and brought her to her knees, then I pulled my dick out
- Suck it, bitch!
And I shut her face with my dick! She submitted, which was damn pleasing. She started sucking, she was sobbing a little already. The way you treat a woman in such moment is very important. Also you need to feel it, not everyone is able to act like this – as my experience shows, it’s quite a rarity… and it goes both my and her ways.
She actually started crying. And believing me.
I tugged her up by the hair and dropped her on the bonnet. I roughly penetrated her and started fucking her really hard.
The storm broke and wind arose!
- I’m scared
- Shut up, bitch! – I drove my fingers into her mouth and went on fucking her.
I threw her down on the ground. It started pouring. She was completely bare, I had my clothes on. The field was wild and the grass was high and sharp! Her tender soft body was spread on the pointed grass mixed with dirt!
- Baby – she screeched – it’s dirty down here! Ah!

MASTER’S CODE: If a woman cares about the setting where the sex is taking place, this means the sex is bad! Fuck her so that she forgets about where she is and feels no pain from arousal!
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Translation 5
I slapped her face, turned her ass towards me and started ripping her clothes off roughly while tearing them off.
She kept teasing me – Keep going, sweetheart! Do it to me, sweetie!
I pulled her towards me and smacked her hard! I know to spank and smack. I practiced different martial art styles and I feel force very well, so I am good at controlling force while smacking hard. I grabbed her by the throat, held her by her neck and made her get on her knees. I unzipped my jeans and took my cock out.
- Suck my cock you fucking whore!
I rammed my cock in her mouth! She was submissive and it was so cool. She started sucking my cock and moaning. The way you treat a woman in such moments is very important. It’s important to feel her, not everyone can play like this – my experience shows that it’s very rare… It’s a rare thing from her and from me.
She did start crying. She believed me.
I pulled her hair roughly and pushed her down onto the car bonnet. I shoved my cock inside her pussy and thrust into her over and over, fucked her hard and roughly.
The sky got flashing with lightning and the wind started blowing!
- I’m scared.
- Shut up, bitch! – I put my fingers in her mouth and kept fucking her roughly.
I pushed her to the ground in the field. It started raining. She was completely naked but I had my clothes on. It was an unkempt field; the grass was high and sharp! Her soft and tender body was on the sharp grass, there was nothing but grass and mud.
- Honey - she screamed. It’s so muddy. Ah!!! I’m cuming!

MASTER’S CODE: If a place where a woman has sex is important to her, then it’s a bad sex! Fuck her hard to make her forget where she is and make her so horny that she can’t feel pain.
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Translation 6
« Shut up, you slut ! » I told her.
« That’s enough, stop it…please » she implored. It was no longer a game. « Stop it, I beg you »
« Shut your mouth ! » I said
I started to fuck her and she cried! It turned me on even more and so I continued until I came.
Afterwards, I stood up and saw that she was all covered in mud. The thunder was rumbling and the lightning struck nearby.
She was laying in the grass and there were cuts all over her body. She was crying and couldn’t get up.
I gently lifted her up and she threw a tantrum at me.
« Baby, Darling, Sweetheart ! » - I pleaded. She did not acknowledge me. Instead, her sobs continued.
I embraced her tenderly. Just a few minutes ago, I had hated her. I had even harmed her. But everything was different after I had an orgasm.
For a moment, the beast, the monster in me had vanished. I began to love her again. I stroked her hair softly and I kissed her barely making any physical contact. Then, I huged her and she cried and cried…
All of the sudden, she said- « Take me home ! I don’t want to see you ever again ! »
I started the car and we drove off. I didn’t speak a word in the car.
Suddenly, she pushed me and released all of the anger and ressentment she had towards me, but I kept sillent. At last, she came back to her senses !
« Pull over », she said, « I want to be alone ». She got out of the car and walked away. I just stood there and looked at the receding storm.
We stood like this for about ten minutes, with her looking in one direction and I, in the other.
Ten minutes later, I felt her gentle embrace from behind me. I turned around and she stared at me with her wide eyes.
« Thank you with all my heart. I love you ! »

EXPERT’S RULE : If you can’t say what’s positive, don’t state simply the negative. Express negativity only if you can express what’s positive afterwards, and with the same magnitude.
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