Yesterday i was in the pool , then a set came full of boys and girls .

i was sitting under the sun , they went inside the pool , i waited for them to be saparted from the guys or something , then i waited for like 30 mins , and then i went to the pool .

the group of girls were swimming , so i went nearby , the group wasnt sticking to eachother , i thought if there was a way for me to get them all to lsn or something there was no way , so i opned some of the group .

ME : excuse me guys , can i ask you a quick question?

HBS: they laughed , and they said yeah sure .

Me : im making an article for school and i just rembered i need some ladies opinons for it , who do you think lies more boys or girls .

Then we talked for a bit about that and i teased them a bit

ME : and who do you think cheats more?

We had a talk abt that and i negged some of them and my target.

Then they were swimming away , i didnt want to follow them cuz it would make me less important , i knew i had no game .

After 30 mins , i was sitting under the sun again , and they were swimming .

Then suddenly they were waving to me , i ignored it for a bit ( to make me seem as the prize ) , then the second time they did it i waved back

then i went in the water for a bit , they were near me but they didnt talk , so i splashed water with my hands on them , then they were laughing , but still didnt talk .

Next , one of the girls wre saying i hate boys or something (talking between the group not to me) so i went in and said , How dare you talk abt guys this way ?

she was like i didnt talk to you , i talked to my freinds ( in a bitchy way )

i had to keep their attention so i kept talking bla bla bla


After that the guys came , i got introduced to them , we talked , then they also went away with the group .

after like 30 mins , i wanted to leave , so i went ,

Me: its nice to meet you guys , how can i get a hold of you , do you hav facebook?

they were like do we hav facebook? , then they said gv us ur facebook and then i left .



Tell me what ive done good , and what ive done wrong i would really appriciate it

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you miss 100% of the shots you don't take.

It's not a bad first attempt. More or less you did well.

Some would argue a different way but personally I'd say please for the love of god don't quote Mystery lines word for word. My sister told me a line a guy used on her and I immediately recognized it as a pick up line because it was one of Mystery's lines word for word.

Not only will someone catch you someday, which isn't that big a deal i guess, but it's clearly not coming from you. I personally prefer natural game but even if you prefer canned game, find some other lines.

Also, I would never leave my contact info with a girl. I would either get theirs or leave without anything. It's generally a bad idea to leave your info with them if you expect to get anything out of it. Unless of course you enjoy being another notch on their post or a confidence booster.

Especially since women are fickle and are highly unlikely to contact you. This can even still apply occasionally when your game is tight. Some women just don't like making that move.

I'd say keep reading and go out and try again. You'll get it eventually.


Edit: I just noticed your from the emirates. The good news is that it is far less likely they've heard of Mystery. They are also more in tune with Western thoughts than other arab nations are so this pick up info will be more useful to you.

On the other hand, the culture is till different so you will have to figure out what u can and can't do over there.

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