Hi guys,

i really hesitated for like a couple of days before posting but its killing me so i shoot.

i met this girl look nice and all we started talking and everything was allright. although there were still things that caught my eye, call me paranoid. she knew that i lived not far but didnt come greet me when she moved in, so at day 1 i did so myself. i didnt think much of it. we talked about her and also about me before she got out to a party (this is really akward for me : should i have reacted here ?) but instead told to have fun and promised tomorrow to take her out on a walk (here idea). day2 i went at the hour i said i would and saw her actually cleaning the appartment (really!!+ excuse now difucult to go out) when i said i go out now to sport so later i can go out if of course you dont want to break your promise. she accepted at a new hour. we went out and had fun, there was a lot of kino (oh did i mention there was a kiss but she didnt reply on day1 began to talk about being friends and so on) then at end of journey we were walking hand in hand only in bus not outside (whas that a hint) also before going in she asked where do i live (gosh i look so noob so i didnt pay much attention but no close here either) but day3 here room and it was awfull at first fun but the more we went i received alot of question that his neighbour asked me like about my studies, my exes all questions that put,me in,a bad daylight also she began talking how great he was, caught up in jalousie i told her that he told me not interessed in you, after that she began again with : we are good friend and that made it for me, there was something going on although she asked me to come back and there is rapport am i imaging this invisible enemy or am i really getting played. she stays just for 5 month and she just want fun she said so am i too serious i tried not put,pressure but what to do with the neigbour.
this is my first field so please be gentle and helpful if you can

You need to break down your post into paragraphs and use dialogs for who is saying what. For example:

Bla so this what was said;

Me - I bla bla
Her- bla ha

Grammar doesn't have to be perfect but I read it all and I have no idea what you're saying, it's like speaking Klingon.

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