Okay, so after starting all of this, I've gotten into the hang of going out sober all the time (used to go out every weekend and drink, now go out every weekend and am designated driver )
Anyway, so went out with my friends, was feeling really energetic (downed 2 rockstars and a monster) first my friends and I went to a juvie (under 18 party) and just danced and stuff for a while then went to town (we are all 18-19, only need to be 18 to drink legally in australia) so we rocked the dance floor in town, I was trying out new dance moves that I was feeling, slightly copied off a brazilian friend of mine.
Then nearing the end of the night, my friend got kicked out of the club we were at for spitting on some guy, he was drunk and doesnt remember :\, but we went to the kebab shop. So me and another friend (body builder) knew one girl at this table so went and sat down and we were chatting to them all for a while, then some of their other friends walked into the kebab shop and came over. This one girl that looked reasonably sober came and stood next to where I was sitting so I started conversation with her
(yes this is terribly written, it's midnight :\)
(Also not 100% sure of all of her replies :\)
M=me
HB=Girl
M:This must be the party table hey
HB:[forgot what she said]
M: [forgot what I said]
HB:[forgot what she said]
M: [forgot what I said]
HB: [forgot what she said] then she grabbed a chair and sat down next to me.
Here I decided to use a line from Roosh V's book "Bang"
M: "So I heard a rumour you don't like my shirt", then kinda half mumbled,
my mum helped pick it out" as she had already started to reply (was wearing dark jeans, dress shoes, cool shirt with a heap of bikes on it, then a vest over that)
HB: Oh no your shirt is awesome! I love it! (she then moves on to compliment my overall dress sense, from shoes and jeans to my style of wearing the vest)
So I was out of things to say so decided to try a second opener, got it from this site actually..
M: Are you the kind of girl that can accept a sincere compliment?
now this didnt go as scripted on this site and the way that PAPA did it but I winged it a little anyway
HB: Yeah I guess so haha why?
M: Oh cool well I am too! you start!
HB: I've already complimented you on everything
M: Go something not clothing then haha, you could say something like I'm cute or what ever
HB: haha okay, I think you're cute
M: Aww you're so sweet, I really like your shoes
HB: hehe thanks
Now at this stage I was already running out of this to talk about so I decided to try out the 5 questions liar game on a whim, I think I also said an opener or 2 to her to fill in space which she laughed at and said things in response to

M: explained rules of the game, asked her if she wants to play, but if she looses she has to buy me a bottle of water
HB: okay I'll play
M: So do you understand the rules of the game?
HB: Yes
M: Hahaha okay so 1 bottle of water then, and mocked her a little about already loosing, then was like "Okay okay I'll give you another chance"
HB: Okay I'm ready [something else I forgot]
M: Okay what is this (pointed to table)
HB: Chair
M: What ..colour are your eyes? (she had nice green eyes that I hadn't said anything about)
HB: Orange
I found the actual questions hard to come up with but understood the basics enough to come up with some, but wanted better questions for next time so might memorize the scripted ones...
So I stumbled around a bit then
M: What colour is the wall (it was grey)
HB: Pink!
M: Okay, how many questions was that?
HB: 10!
M: hahaha you've played this before haven't you!!?
HB: No hehe
M: OOHHH got you again haha
then both had a laugh and what not, little bit of kino

Now I think we may have chatted a little bit more, then her friend walked over, which was actually good for me since I was basically out of things to say after that, so I said
M: Is there anyway we can continue this conversation?
HB: yeah we could text or something
M: okay cool *unlocks phone (I'm kinda anal about my phone and have a heap of password locks and crap on it...) and passes phone to her after she pulls out her phone*
then she passes me her phone
She puts in her name as "Amelia "
I put my name in as Mitch Cute Cool Shirt (said I was cute and complimented my shirt)

Now I've organized for her to come round my house hopefully next weekend if she doesnt flake, if she does oh well

Any improvements or tips etc would be much appreciated

good job man. sounds like you opened and built attraction really well. How long have you been in the game for?....

One suggestion is try preparing some mid game stuff so that you don't ever get the feeling that your running out of thing to say. try making a statement and then follow it up with a question... you obviously have to tailor this to the girl but an example is. "you look like a bit of a bad ass! what's the naughtiest thing you've done!"... then LISTEN!! if you listen you can easily find conversation threads from what they say. Just be ready for them to ask the same question back, If your gonna plan a few stock questions like this to ask then make sure you have a kick ass story to tell of your own. Its a great chance to DHV!

Then when you run out off things to say again move on to the next stock statement/question. Throw in some routines and kino escalation and you'll be taking girls home in no time.

freak

Thanks for the advice, will definitely look into that.
Um honestly don't feel like I'm "in the game" yet at all, more on the outside hearing one liners and shit, but for the sake of it, I've been reading, concentrating and taking in information for about a month, I bought "The Game" etc around December so all in all about 2 months, and that was the first time I've properly applied material from what I've learnt.