Hello PUAs and AFC's alike

kinda new to the whole game thing and having trouble closing.

opening is not to hard for me. i get a little liquid courage, if a girl stares me down and i stare her down and find her attractive im usually over there talking with her.
my openers are decent. HB 6 last week- Me...your the shyest girl in here..Her..What?..Why.. Me. Cause you keep looking at me and cant even say hi. we go from their i get her number didnt f close she was married..i dont mess with married chics..personal choice. it got real wierd when i went to her house ill tell the story some time if i feel like typing.
HB8 Last night. walk into this wierd house party with wierd art all over. me smiling and looknig at all the art look to the hot hb8 next to me as i walk in like woah this is a crazy drunken night did i just break into a f^ckin musuem? Her i know right i got dragged here too where are we? lead to a 10-15minute convo off to the side with her by her friends ...NO FKIN number close! <kicks myself

but anyways back on track i dont have a hard time talking to random people. I;m cocky funny, use playfull negs lightly, can handle a group of girls, will earn friends approval and quickly issolate my target..lie about my work. I catch turtles and sell them to petstores by the way, kinda make the girl talk more then me since they love to talk about themselves i sort of just listen take words from what they said and give it back to em. But lately i havnt been closing.

It starts playfull, gets semi personal, my keno is decent i talk with my hands alot so i just kinda poke em playfully as im talking and get thier attention always look into eyes.. loving the tell me 5 things about you ones gotta be a lie and ima guess the lie line. it never usually works i mean sometimes i get lucky but its great conversation. but from there i get sidetracked, a friend will come in and get thier attention about something random, conversation will run empty after a little bit, and eventually I find myself getting a smile goodbye or even hugs....HUGS?... WEAK!

some good tips on adding my 1-2 numbers a week to 5-10+?? on taking my game to the next level??