Really your profile is made up of stuff I've seen in these and other forums. Nothing original at all.
Redo the whole thing, it says nothing about you......
Thats the best part that it says nothing about me. You need to make a girl earn it.....
Why would I redo it, since I get girls coming to me. Also, it is not original and any guy starting out feel free to copy and paste it (so long as your not in chicago).
Glad to hear you have them lining up.
I actually used a profile simalir to that. The "totally awesome" and being "better than your ex in bed" are pretty good lines. I went out this chick from PoF when I was using that... We were at the club and she said, "buy my Vodka, it makes me better than your ex in bed"..
Ended up getting laid from that line in my profile.
The only problem is a lot of guys use that, tho. I've been called on it a few times. I just said, "they're all cheap chinese imitations".
I changed my profile from that, and it made a HUGE difference in the messages I got. I do a lot better now. Just saying I've improved mine from that.....