Constructive Criticism on the profile, thanks :P
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PatrickLH
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 1:48 am    Post subject: Constructive Criticism on the profile, thanks :P Reply with quote
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I'm pretty happy with it; might put off some girls who don't roll like a rock star though Wink
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skypirate1965
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 8:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hi Patrick,

well you've got balls to post a link to your profile.

Ok first impression - Get new photos done. The main one is washed out and I think it's a bit of a bad image you're conveying if people can see that you've taken a picture of yourself in a mirror. I'm male and my first thought is - Doesn't the guy have friends to take a picture of him? The 3rd one with you in a cap is the best on the front page. Get some more done of you playing guitar and on your board (an action shot)

Cannot think of anything else - maybe ditch the quote

Anyway just my opinion

good luck
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 2:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
most respectable girls aren't into drugs, if you do drugs thats cool don't advertise it though
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