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Author:  ososensual [ Thu Aug 04, 2011 8:13 pm ]
Post subject:  all I have is poetry

all you saw was warmth
let me introduce you to the ososensual freeze
null void, emptiness
back burners shatter from my blue skin
the ice shards around my heart will cut you if you even think about it
pumping frost down your neck
I'm gonna freeze this bitch out


shelikesme poems.. ummm this is the poem I posted on my wall..

is it letting her know, I'm not happy?

o and yes im freezing her out..

she just messaged me asking about shit...but fuck that

she said something about showing less affection to me so she can feel better...



advice on how to properly freeze her out, but without LMR because we aren't fucking just talking

Author:  Bacchvs [ Thu Aug 04, 2011 8:57 pm ]
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Nice poem, I am not sure about the outcome. But I think she will feel pretty shitty. Poetry can be very strong, right?

Author:  ososensual [ Thu Aug 04, 2011 10:20 pm ]
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depends

Author:  TheFreshPrince [ Fri Aug 05, 2011 12:43 am ]
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Maybe it's just me, but I have difficulty understanding your situation and your apparent anger from what little you posted. Tell us what she did, why it upset you, and why you think posting this poem will help it. Then ask us a question.

Author:  pumpington [ Fri Aug 05, 2011 6:19 am ]
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this shit sounds reactive, if you have not slept with a girl, don't let her know anything she does holds any emotional weight with you, freeze outs are supposed to demostrate the art of not giving a fuck about someone, not that you REALLY GIVE A FUCK AND WANT REVENGE, if your trying to make someone feel guilty for something by saying HEY LISTEN TO MY EMO POEM, IM FUCKING PISSED AT YOU AND NOT TALKING TO YOU, your doin it wrong

Author:  Fvckitimout [ Fri Aug 05, 2011 6:37 am ]
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^ very true.

Nice poem though. I literally saw ice shards suddenly breaking off from the skin while there is fire in the person's eyes. An interesting oximoron and a very powerful imagery. Still i suggest you reserve poems till you want to be emotionally wity her. Unless its like a sex poem.

I have a dick

You have a pussy.

Lets fuck.

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