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| Author: | The Moose [ Wed Mar 03, 2010 6:32 am ] |
| Post subject: | Text Convo Critique |
So me being relatively new at gaming I thought I'd share my first good text convo that I'm somewhat proud of for critique. Kinda long but I didn't know the standard length for text convo posts. All of this takes place after a HB7 comes over to pick something up at my place... hb: sorry we interrupted you me: now i'm going to fail my test for sure lol hb: haha ya i'll take the blame lol me: yess hb: you seemed pissed me: haha, thats how i look when i'm focused hb: i dont like it me: well come back and we'll have a do over hb: i wouldnt want to distract you lol me: it takes a lot to distract a sharp mind like mine hb: i'm extremely distracting, everyone tells me me: maybe everyone else is just easily distracted, wrap your mind around that hb: possibly but maybe not me: people probably find you distracting because you have a distracting personality, in a good way hb: ok, gotcha well thank you me: no problemo time passes hb: did you get that text from ***** the other night? me: ya lol hb: did you like it? (text said "sexy can i?") me: my cutoff for booty calls is 3 btw hb: haha we stole her phone but ill be sure to keep that in mind blah blah blah me: didn't get the meaning of that text btw lol. but then again any text that says sexy in it must be good, reminded me of how I like my women...full of intrigue lol blah blah blah hb: ha, i know we sent "meow i'm a cat" to a lot of people blah me: (talk about an internet vid) blah hb: oh i have some funny vids i could show you me: well maybe we can do some watching when i get done studying hb: sounds good just let me know me: might me later though hb: thats fine |
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| Author: | mrcoffee999888 [ Wed Mar 03, 2010 6:15 pm ] |
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seemed to work. Idk which girl this, but if you don't know her that well, maybe a little too direct in spots (keep em' guessing) But it accomplished positive results, so no real critique. Good work newbie. |
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| Author: | Carmo [ Thu Mar 04, 2010 3:29 pm ] |
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Not too bad but I would try to keep it shorter. Roissy has a theory that you should imagine that all your texts will be shown on a jumbotron at a big sports arena. So the litmus test is would you be emberassed or not if it was shown to thousands of people. Keep that in mind when texting. |
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